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I did my paper (you can see in the attachment) and I got comments from my teacher to edit my submission as you see in the attachment.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE read my teacher comment and answer based on the comments and direction
Please start from Zero but keep the same topic : Trafficking Children
I need new:
(a) the research question(s) you plan to consider,
(b) your thesis statement (2-3 sentences) introducing your paper and outlining the event you have chosen, and
(c) at least five sources
(d) Full outline
This is the assignment direction and follow the directions
International Law
Research Paper
Your assignment is to research and analyze an international law created in response to an international issue. For example, you could focus on one treaty or one institution (e.g., created to adjudicate international law). The purpose of the paper is to evaluate the issue area surrounding the law, and the behavior(s) of states in order to evaluate the effectiveness of the international law you have chosen.
Parts of the Assignment:
1. Topic and Sources
The Topic should include 3 parts:
(a) the research question(s) you plan to consider,
(b) your thesis statement (2-3 sentences) introducing your paper and outlining the event you have chosen, and
(c) at least five sources to be used (e.g., one book, one journal, one scholarly website). Include a Reference/Bibliography page and cite using Chicago Citation style at least 5 different sources. You may use scholarly journals, books, government documents and web sites (including at least one book and one journal) for your sources. Encyclopedias including internet encyclopedias (wikipedia, answers.com, etc.) are not scholarly sources and should not be used as references for your paper.
2. Outline (full outline)
You must submit an outline of the paper that includes your thesis statement and all of the parts of the paper with enough description of each item to indicate that you have been working on the assignment.
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Child trafficking laws
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Research questions
1. What is considered child trafficking?
2. Which regions are notorious for child trafficking?
3. What are the reasons for child trafficking?
4. What has been the impact of the protocol on child trafficking?
Thesis
The United Nations Protocol to Prevent, Suppress and Punish Trafficking in Persons, Especially
Women and Children is one of the three protocols that were adopted by the United Nations
during the Palermo Convention as a supplement to the 2000 Convention against Transnational
Organized Crime. This protocol has been an important aspect towards putting up a fight against
child trafficking which had been rampant before the adoption of the protocol.
References
Big rise in human trafficking cases in Scotland. February 26, 2018.
http://www.bbc.com/news/uk-scotland-43191461 (accessed February 27, 2018).
Ezeilo, Joy N. Achievements of the Trafficking Protocol: Perspective...