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1, Please create a work page and use more in-text citation.

2, Revise the grammar and check some sentence is fluency.

3, Add some points about Wechat in China, use resources to support ideas.

4, Talk about good sides and bad sides about Wechat.


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When I was in China, Tencent Company made a new App name “Wechat”. This app is a social software that make us easy to contact with each other. Wechat is a cross-platform communication tool which support single and multi-person participation. Send voice, pictures, video, and text via mobile phone network. And it has a lot of function like video intercom function, accept messages, photo/video sharing, location sharing, message exchange, WeChat payment, financial communication, games and other services. And now We can us Wechat pay in China, Macao, Japan, Korea, Singapore, Malaysia, Thailand… For example, My father and I go to a park and I want eat something but we leave money bag in home. We go to a shop and use ours phone pay the money for this shop. And according to database of scientists’ study, there are more than 3 hundred millions people use Wechat pay in china. And then, Tencent put forward “No cash life” and create a first “mobile payment festival”. Some people think that wechat promote the development of society, and some people use wechat everyday and they think that wechat is a convenience app. But a few people think that wechat changes the world a lot, it has bad influence to people. In my opinion, WeChat is good for people because of several reason. At first, many people think that WeChat is convenient because you don't need to carry your wallet. You can use WeChat in everywhere and every time, so it reduces the chance of being stolen. So now China rarely use cash pay, some places can only use WeChat because they can save a lot of time and they can work efficiency in this way. People started to rely on WeChat because people could use it online shopping, online transfer, money management. Some companies even pay bonuses or red envelopes on WeChat, so people have a lot of money on WeChat. But from last year, WeChat started charging people when they wanted to transfer WeChat money to the savings bank card. As the competition for cashless payment platforms intensifies, it actually brings benefits to consumers and businesses. A person in charge of parking with a cashless payment platform told reporters that cashless payment has improved work efficiency: “After WeChat payment, it really relieved our toll collectors at the administrative toll office from a lot of work pressure. According to our system statistics, The payment proportion of WeChat payment has risen to 37.5%.” Secondly, benefit of WeChat payments is that people can avoid taking too much cash with people because WeChat can transfer money in real time without limit. People don't have to go to the bank to make an appointment and wait for a large amount of cash, they just need to transfer it with WeChat. But wechat pay has the same problem as credit cards, that is if someone else knows other people’s password code, it can cause serious consequences. And in China, a lot of people try to steal other people's WeChat password code and then they can get money. But WeChat is trying to increase the security of WeChat payment, they try to make wechat only can enroll in one smartphone. And WeChat started using real-name system, and people can only continue to use WeChat pay by entering their id number. So in this way, it can make sure the security of wechat pay. But the phenomenon of stolen credit cards has always existed, and banks are not looking for ways to make up for security flaws. But this is only for young people, and many old people don’t how to use wechat pay, maybe they even don’t know what wechat is. And some old people refuse to use wechar pay. It can be attributed to the complexity of smartphone apps and the elderly's distrust of online payment security. And a lot of old people refuse to use wechat. Because the concept and thinking of the elderly still remain in the past, many fraudsters use WeChat to deceive the elderly.The data shows that the higher the degree of “tech phobia” among the elderly, the higher the proportion of people cheated on the Internet. 71.6% of the elderly people with a high degree of fear have been cheated. This is because the more the older people are afraid of new things, high technology, and the less confident of their own abilities, the more likely they are to become scammers.The survey also found that health care is the type of Internet articles most popular for the elderly. 66.6% of elderly people who like health care articles were once cheated on the Internet, and they received free red packets, free mobile phone traffic, and discounted purchases. The proportion of people cheated is high, more than 50% of the elderly said they were deceived by this information. And another good aspect of wechat is that we can contact friends and family whenever and wherever we are. Because WeChat's voice and video functions only need wifi to connect. Unlike in the past,people can only write a letter and use telephone, but they need to worry about expensive telephone charges. And for young people, weChat has expanded people’s lives and found more people with similar interests. You even can contact WeChat and people in the vicinity, and you can also find a co-tenant and you don't need to go to an intermediary company to find roommates as you did before. And wechat help a lot of international students, they are easily get depressive because of lonely. There are also many reasons that cause international students to suffer from depression. In the course of providing free psychological counseling for international students, Bruin Study Abroad Workshop concluded that a large part of the reasons for depression in international students come from the pressure from sudden departure from a homeland to an unfamiliar environment.For example, In the past, people had to rely on letters to communicate with their families when they were studying abroad. They could only watch their loved ones to miss their hometown every year. After WeChat appears, we can contact our family in real time. This is to reduce the phenomenon of depression in people studying abroad because we can get support and encouragement from our families when we are sad. But even some people say that WeChat has made people communicate only on the Internet and they are no longer paying attention to bits and pieces of life. And they think that it is impolite to meet people on the Internet because people need face-to-face communication to feel the true meaning of each other. To be honest, a lot of people are addicted to watch wechat. Correspondingly, people are also addicted to brushing friends circles. Every few minutes , you should brush a circle of friends, or you will feel isolated from the world, psychological panic. Think carefully and fear that these people who rely so much on virtual social networking will lack real social skillsAnd interaction in wechat can cause people depressed. Because people who deepen their sense of self-identity through published status and photos are the most vulnerable in reality. Those beautiful photos and status are the means by which they establish a good self-image and let them think they are valuable. Over time will lead to depression in the gap between reality and friends. According to research of scientists, among the 19-32 year olds who participated in the study, those who brushed social networking sites most frequently every week were 2.7 times more likely to suffer from depression than those who did not use social networking sites. Of the 1,787 young Americans who participated in the study, they used social media on average 61 minutes a day and logged in 30 times a week. One quarter of the subjects had a tendency to have depression. In conclusion, weChat is a platform for the income of the general public. While bringing convenience to the public, it has brought some negative influences. However, these negative influences are not caused by WeChat. They are caused by people's psychological reasons and their own causes those influence. But wechat is really good for us because we only need to use wechat pay instead of take cash with us and we can use it to contact friends and family in anywhere and anytime. It’s a useful way for a lot of people who go abroad, because when they use wechat to contact their parents, they can reduce their homesickness and depressive. Wechat is benefit people a lot.
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