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hey my professor put his input on it. My friend and i did edit it a little but i just need help fixing the errors.

like the first sentence he underlined it, it should be changed.

Then the next(2nd) sentence " HR 2646, a bill that supports families in mental health crises, provides treatments and care to severely mental ill people" that could be inputed instead of whats there.

The third sentence i guess doesn't make sense, he has question marks around that one, for the 4th sentence he asks if American Mental Health is a company so we need to specify what that is. he also says the 4th sentence doesn't make any sense. cause hr 2646 is a bill.

The start of the 2nd paragraph he is confused on " proposed position" so we should change that too. those next 2 paragraphs need sources he says.

keep the part where it says "editorial board". thats the file of the bill i already sent you. The next paragraph with no errors is good.

Then fix the 2nd to last paragraph where it says "no it is not, because it is not the ACA??" so i guess its not an example of the ACA.

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lots of problems most of this makes - 8-10:25am !! Gave What does mell whina mean makes no sense? no sense - Natalie Bastagian Stephania Mejia see me HR 2646 Most Republicans claim that the main reason for mass confession is not a fire but a mental illness. HR 2646, a law that supports families in mental health crises, is at the heart of this ?? dealing with mental health problems. HR 2646 is an essential principle for integrated mental health 27 is this a company ? reform in Americà. American Mental Health and its more than 200 subsidiaries and supporters = = across the state work tirelessly to advocate the precise bugs of the new lawmaking. ? This proposed position aims at better coordination of mental health resources at the federal from where? level and would get staffed by a specialized psychiatric clinician. The bill also establishes an Sources Interdepartmental Coordination Committee for Mental Illness, whose mission is to evaluate all federal programs focusing on the treatment of people with the severe mental illness. HR 2646 also addresses the critical psychiatric workforce shortage. HR 2646 authorizes a workforce development report designed to assess current gaps in the mental health workforce and how those gaps can best close by recruiting the next generation of psychiatric physicians and mental health professionals. It also defines the barriers to the participation of children and adolescent psychiatrists in the National Health Services Corps and authorizes the program of minority scholarships. HR 2646 aims to improve the implementation of the Law on Mental Health and Equality of Ethnic Components. It also supports innovative care models. date, author In a article written in the Sacramento Bee Congress steps toward helping mentally ill people by the Editorial Board, "The bill could provide more money to states to hospitalize the I did you submit this to me? . OD F4 most severely mentally ill people, require Medicare to pay for anti-psychotic medication, and Physical and mental illnesses”. provide greater parity in care for people with I could reduce the duration of long-term disability The account supports care models that for patients with severe mental illness, such as recovery from schizophrenia episode programs, which aims at helping individuals with schizophrenia lead independent and fulfilling lives. HR 2646 helps to train and provide the staff necessary for those who are mentally ill and refuse to t is not because it is not the ACA??? treatments, as well as a help to prevent suicide. no it b HR 2646 is an example of the “Affordable Care Act” that was brought upon to the public on March 23, 2010 by Barack Obama (Greenberg & Page, The Struggle for Democracy, Chapter 17.6). When cases such as mental health care was “often too ignored” (Congress steps toward helping mentally ill) fortunately Tim Murphy creator of the bill pushed and pushed to get the bill passed. Expanding the Health Care Policy to everyone no matter what type of health issues you need to have attended. Medical has the purpose to provide those of minority today of the Mental Illness population providing what Barack Obama's ACA was for, affordable health care for everyone. This bill was first introduced after the shooting in Sandy Hook but lost to an overruling of votes. This bill is not meant to provide those people who are ill with housing nor gun rights just the help that is needed such individuals. The bill stepped up helping millions of Americans today protecting everyone's right the access to affordable health care.
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