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Completely rewrite one page of your critical analysis/evaluation. DO NOT JUST EDIT. You must completely rewrite the page in order to receive full credit. You must also provide a paragraph of reflection explaining why and how you redrafted this section of your annotated bibliography or critical analysis/evaluation.
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1. About a one page section of the original draft of your critical analysis/evaluation;
2. About a one page rewritten new draft of this section of your critical analysis/evaluation;
3. At least a paragraph reflection explaining why and how you redrafted this section of your critical analysis/evaluation.

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1)a teachers comment about my previous critical analysis evaluation .

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Critical Analysis Purpose: The purpose of this assignment is to develop strategies for identifying and articulating criteria for evaluation as well as applying those criteria to a specific source. One common genre for writing to evaluate is a critical analysis. Typically, it expresses an opinion about how good or bad something is. In other words, it is a communication that praises or blames something. A successful critical analysis will express evaluative opinions that go beyond personal taste. They use research to establish objective criteria and then apply those criteria to whatever is being evaluated. Choose a source from your annotated bibliography and perform a source evaluation in order to determine if that source will be beneficial in your research and answering your research question. Audience: Consider writing for an audience of people who will be interested in doing research similar to yours. In other words, you might write for an audience of other 102 students who also want to do research on the topic you are interested in. Conventions: There are lots of ways to organize an evaluative writing project. In this assignment, you should accomplish the following objectives in order to write an effective evaluation of a source: ● Introduce your topic and state your purpose. Your evaluation’s introduction should grab your audience’s attention and make your purpose clear, which must include a thesis statement. ● Develop and Describe Your Criteria. Put some thought into this. For example, you might need to think about what makes a research source in general, as well as what makes a credible source about the topic you’re investigating. There’s no exact minimum or maximum for criteria; however, you will probably want to have several in order to demonstrate a complex evaluation. ● Evaluate the thing. Use your criteria to evaluate the thing you are looking at. Also, think in terms of ethos. Will you seem credible if your evaluation does not include any weaknesses? What if your evaluation finds absolutely nothing of value? ● Conduct Some Research. This assignment doesn’t require extensive research, but you can do some investigating to develop and support your criteria or support your evaluation. For example, how might a small survey provide evidence for your evaluation? Trouble Spots: Trouble Spots are the things that most frequently prove to be obstacles for writers. Along with the feedback from me (your instructor) and peers, you may identify other trouble spots for you in this assignment, but here are a few that we encounter regularly: ● How do I establish criteria for my evaluation? ● Do I need to have a balance in my discussion of the topic’s strengths and weaknesses? ● What do I do if I conclude my chosen source is ineffective or not helpful to my research? ● Do I have to use my chosen source in my research project? Take a moment to see if you can provide your own answers to these questions. Then take time to develop your own questions and potential trouble spots for this assignment. Format Times New Roman font, 12 point Last name and page number in upper right-hand corner This heading in the top left-hand corner: Your name My name ❏ ❏ ❏ ❏ Class and section Due date (Day Month Year) A title centered with no boldface, underline, italics or quotation marks Surname 1 Name Instructor Course Date Global warming Anderson, Thomas R., Ed Hawkins, and Philip D. Jones. "CO2, the greenhouse effect and global warming: from the pioneering work of Arrhenius and Callendar to today's Earth System Models." Endeavor 40.3 (2016): 178-187. Available at https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0160932716300308 In their article, Anderson, Hawkins, and Jones explain the fears that if the current rate at which the earth’s surface is warming is not controlled, the world may be looking at dangerous increases in atmospheric temperatures. They use a previously developed planetary energy budget to predict the future with regards to global warming. Through this prediction, they are able to come up with a model that can be sued to forecast the level of greenhouse emissions throughout the current century. Although complex, the article simplifies the concept of climate change by simply relating it to the simplest principles of radiative transfers. They also discuss CO2 which is the most common and highly dangerous of all the greenhouse gases. They show how CO2 causes the greenhouse effect, how it is emitted into the atmosphere, and finally, its emission can be controlled. This article adds to the list of sources that give more insight into the entire issue of global warming and how it can be managed. The projections on the rise of global temperatures should worry everyone to the point of acting. Surname 2 Corner, Adam, et al. "How do young people engage with climate change? The role of knowledge, values, message framing, and trusted communicators." Wiley Interdisciplinary Reviews: Climate Change 6.5 (2015): 523-534. Available at https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1002/wcc.353 One of the greatest challenges in controlling global warming is getting everyone to understand the course and support it. In their article, Corner et al. talks about one of the most unfortunate yet very important thing when it comes to climate change. They talk about how to get young people to understand climate change and how they can contribute towards ensuring climatic sustainability. They show the importance of effective communication and sharing of knowledge about the causes and dangers of global warming. Actually, many people do not know what climate change means. Most people think it is something out of their reach. A lot of times people think it is something that scientists need to fix. In reality, global warming and climate change is caused by the human population in general and the solution lies in the people themselves. If they are made to understand this, they can become conscious about their actions and how they contribute to climate change. It is only through the effective sharing of knowledge that people will understand their roles. For example, when they have the right information, they will know which ways to contribute to the cause. Del Río, Pablo, and Mercedes Burguillo. "Assessing the impact of renewable energy deployment on local sustainability: Towards a theoretical framework." Renewable and sustainable energy reviews 12.5 (2008): 1325-1344. Available at https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1364032107000433 Surname 3 In their article, these authors argue that other than the obvious and over-studied benefits of renewable sources of energy to the environment, they also have other socioeconomic benefits like diversifying energy sources, the creation of employment opportunities, fostering domestic development, and supporting local industries. Thus, the use of renewable sources of energy is not just for the sake of the environment but it has numerous benefits that should be the focus moving forward. In this article, the authors explore various studies done on the use of renewable energy. Essentially, they show how other scholars have placed a lot of significance on the use of renewable sources of energy. If anything, using renewable sources of energy is cheaper in the long run. It is also one of the ways to create new avenues for creating energy. With these sources under consideration, industries, individuals, and households need not depend on the traditional sources of energy. There will be a variety to choose from which will increase competition in the energy industry and ultimately lead to better pricing. Most importantly, too, it will lead to reduced use of non-renewable energy which is highly desired when it comes to preventing global warming. Howell, Beverly J., and HTIS In August. "Global Warming 101." (1998). Available at http://infohouse.p2ric.org/ref/10/09687.pdf In their article, Howell & August define global warming as the general increase in the levels of greenhouse gases. Some of these gases include carbon dioxide (CO2), some fluorocarbons, and methane. Essentially, these gases act like a glass covering on the earth such that heat coming from the sun enters but the heat that bounces back from the earth's surface is blocked and accumulates. This is because while coming from the sun, the heat is strong enough to penetrate but once it hits the surface it becomes weak. The accumulation leads to increased temperatures on earth. According to Howell & August, over 85% of these gases in the US result Surname 4 from burning fossil fuels. Thus, reducing the risks of global warming, to a great extent, will require the reduction of the use of fossil fuels (i.e. oil, gas, and coal). This article discusses some of the policy mechanisms that can be used to reduce energy consumption and therefore reduce the amount of greenhouse gases released into the atmosphere. The article can be used to prove the connection between energy and global warming. Specifically, it can be used to support the claim that reducing the number of non-renewable sources of energy will check the current global warming rates. Jacobson, Mark Z. "Review of solutions to global warming, air pollution, and energy security." Energy & Environmental Science 2.2 (2009): 148-173. Available at http://pubs.rsc.org/en/content/articlehtml/2009/ee/b809990c The article ranks the various sources of renewable energy that are currently being used to check global warming. For example, hydroelectric power is the world’s largest source of renewable energy. Other sources include wind energy, geothermal power, solar energy, and nuclear energy. The technology behind each source of energy is explored. Also, the potential of reducing global warming is examined. Being the greatest source of renewable energy, hydroelectric power has the greatest potential of checking global warming. This is achieved by providing an alternative to conventional sources of energy which are not clean and release too much greenhouse gases. This article provides insightful information about the various sources of energy. It thus gives various alternatives to fossil fuels. It can be used to further understand the other sources of renewable energy that have not been widely developed. Further, it can be used to further diversify the available sources of renewable energy. Surname 5 Liu, Hsiao-Wei, Jia-Yuh Yu, and Chao-An Chen. "Changes of tropical precipitation and convective structure under global warming projected by CMIP5 model simulations." Terrestrial, Atmospheric & Oceanic Sciences 29.4 (2018). Available here. In their article, Liu, Yu, and Chen discuss one of the consequences of global warming. On the very onset, they point to the fact that as the earth's climate warms, its capacity to hold water also increases. The result is that there is a general increase in the level of water vapor in the atmosphere. However, this does not necessarily lead changes in humidity. For the most part, as a matter of fact, humidity remains unchanged despite the rise in water vapor. The authors use CMIP5 models to assess the effect of increased air temperature on tropical precipitation. In their article, too, the authors support previous research on the topic that for every 1°C temperature increase, there is at least 6-7% increase in the amount of water vapor in the atmosphere. Away from the information herein presented, one of the most feared effects of global warming is the melting of icebergs which will lead to an increase in the volume of water bodies. If this happens, most of the coastal regions will be affected as water encroaches over land. This article can be used to support the idea that global warming has a huge impact on global precipitation. Panwar, N. L., S. C. Kaushik, and Surendra Kothari. "Role of renewable energy sources in environmental protection: a review." Renewable and Sustainable Energy Reviews 15.3 (2011): 1513-1524. Available at https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1364032110004065 In their article, Panwar, Kaushik, and Kothari provide a detailed report on the importance of renewable sources of energy in protecting the environment. Some of the things they mention Surname 6 include the fact that renewable sources are clean. This means that they produce the least residues. Also, this source of energy is sustainable. Sustainability here means that they can be used over a much longer time to sustain human's energy needs. The article talks about the sun as the source of energy. For example, some of the energy emanating from the sun is tapped and used in different forms like solar power, wind power, and biomass. Technologies that tap sun energy have the potential to reduce emissions of greenhouse gases and therefore check global warming. The current challenges of climate change can be solved by simply substituting the conventional sources of energy with renewable sources like wind and sun. The article also gives an overview on how much CO2 can be avoided by use of cookers, dryers, and water heaters powered by solar energy; and also through the use of biofuels and cooking stoves that use hydrogen gas. Sterner, Michael. Bioenergy and renewable power methane in integrated 100% renewable energy systems: Limiting global warming by transforming energy systems. Vol. 14. kassel university press GmbH, 2009. Available here. In his book, Sterner dwells on the entire issue of global warming and renewable sources of energy. In the book, the author first talks about climate change to include where we are at the moment as a population, the threats of climate change, and the need and avenues for protecting the earth against climate change. The book also talks about energy systems which include the global energy consumption, trends on renewable, fossil, and nuclear energy; and trends on the use of bioenergy. Finally, the association between bioenergy and global warming is discussed in detail which includes the role played by bioenergy in shaping global energy demand like in increasing efficiency in transportation. Most importantly, the book shows the importance of bioenergy in the protection of the climate. This book is hugely informative on the entire topic of renewable sources of energy. It provides detailed explanations and correlations in key concepts Surname 7 in global warming and renewable sources of energy. Also, it informs about the current status of climate change, global warming, and energy consumption. In the end, it suggests a cost-effective model for controlling the emission of greenhouse gases which is very important to the topic. Tan, Sie Ting, et al. "Energy and emissions benefits of renewable energy derived from municipal solid waste: analysis of a low carbon scenario in Malaysia." Applied Energy 136 (2014): 797-804. Available at https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0306261914005777 Waste-to-energy (WtE) is one of the most popular ways of reusing wastes and increasing the level of renewable sources of energy. In their article, Tan et al. discuss the possibility of reducing greenhouse gases by using wastes as sources of energy. The authors analyze the potential of municipal solid waste to produce energy and greenhouse gases. In the study, the authors determine that through proper management of municipal solid waste, it is possible to turn around waste into a resource that will not only produce energy but also produce energy that is ecologically friendly. The conclusions from this study can be sued to support the idea that reusing wastes to produce energy can so well lead to reduced combustion of fossil fuels. This is because even when these organic wastes are not put to use, they still emit these gases. Using them for energy will reduce the overall emissions of greenhouse gases and thereby reduce global warming. Thus, this article is useful in understanding the connection between renewable sources of energy and reducing emissions of harmful gases into the atmosphere. Victor, David G. Global warming gridlock: creating more effective strategies for protecting the planet. Cambridge University Press, 2011. Available here. Surname 8 In his book, Victor speaks about global warming as one of the greatest challenges of the 21st century. Despite numerous studies and conventions on climate change, the world is yet to agree on ways to ensure effective management of global warming. Victor speaks about various sensitive topics related to global warming like the world's leading emitters, policies, and energy inventions. In the book, the author suggests that one of the ways of controlling global warming is through a reduced use of non-renewable energy. Ideally, people have a big input to make to ensure the available sources of energy are used efficiently even when that does not mean completely moving towards renewable energy. For example, use of more efficient vehicles which use little gas to cover longer miles is highly desirable. In their homes, people can do simple things like use gas sparingly, sharing a vehicle whenever possible, and avoiding burning organic wastes. Governments can put policies to govern the use of public means of transport to ensure only a few vehicles are on the road. Things like planting trees should help to balance the levels of CO2 in the atmosphere since plants use this gas in physiological processes. Surname 9 Work Cited Anderson, Thomas R., Ed Hawkins, and Philip D. Jones. "CO2, the greenhouse effect and global warming: from the pioneering work of Arrhenius and Callendar to today's Earth System Models." Endeavor 40.3 (2016): 178-187. Available at https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0160932716300308 Corner, Adam, et al. "How do young people engage with climate change? The role of knowledge, values, message framing, and trusted communicators." Wiley Interdisciplinary Reviews: Climate Change 6.5 (2015): 523-534. Available at https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1002/wcc.353 Del Río, Pablo, and Mercedes Burguillo. "Assessing the impact of renewable energy deployment on local sustainability: Towards a theoretical framework." Renewable and sustainable energy reviews 12.5 (2008): 1325-1344. Available at https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1364032107000433 Howell, Beverly J., and HTIS In August. "Global Warming 101." (1998). Available at http://infohouse.p2ric.org/ref/10/09687.pdf Jacobson, Mark Z. "Review of solutions to global warming, air pollution, and energy security." Energy & Environmental Science 2.2 (2009): 148-173. Available at http://pubs.rsc.org/en/content/articlehtml/2009/ee/b809990c Liu, Hsiao-Wei, Jia-Yuh Yu, and Chao-An Chen. "Changes of tropical precipitation and convective structure under global warming projected by CMIP5 model simulations." Terrestrial, Atmospheric & Oceanic Sciences 29.4 (2018). Available here. Surname 10 Panwar, N. L., S. C. Kaushik, and Surendra Kothari. "Role of renewable energy sources in environmental protection: a review." Renewable and Sustainable Energy Reviews 15.3 (2011): 1513-1524. Available at https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1364032110004065 Sterner, Michael. Bioenergy and renewable power methane in integrated 100% renewable energy systems: Limiting global warming by transforming energy systems. Vol. 14. kassel university press GmbH, 2009. Available here. Tan, Sie Ting, et al. "Energy and emissions benefits of renewable energy derived from municipal solid waste: analysis of a low carbon scenario in Malaysia." Applied Energy 136 (2014): 797-804. Available at https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0306261914005777 Victor, David G. Global warming gridlock: creating more effective strategies for protecting the planet. Cambridge University Press, 2011. Available here. 1 Name\ Pro Date class Critical Analysis: Global Warming Global warming which is also commonly renowned as climate change has become one of the greatest subjects of discussion in the current century due to the threatening impact it presents not only to the current generation but also to the future generations. Researches by various authors and researchers such as Anderson, Hawkins and Philip found that global warming has been on the rise over the years causing climate system increased warming. Research indicates that human activity has been the major contributor to this effect and according to researchers like Corner Adams, Pablo, and Mercedes among many others, the effects of climate change can as well be eliminated by human actions such as sensitization of eco-friendly lifestyles which involves the use of environmentally friendly resources. Nevertheless, it is equally important to have a critical understanding of the causes and impact of climate change for development of impactful prevention strategies. In this case, therefore, an audit of human lifestyles should be the center focus in generating the insights of global warming right from its causes to its prevention. Most importantly, a multidisciplinary approach to the problem of global warming will offer great chances to critically understand the entire problem and its impact and result to a lasting solution. Aderson, Hawkins and Philip, authors of the article ‘CO2, the greenhouse effect and global warming: from the pioneering work of Arrhenius and Calendar to today’s earth system models’ are some of the major contributors in the research of the impact of global warming in the past and current centuries. The authors use the earth system models (ESMs) to substantiate 1 their forecast on the impact of global warming. The model is fundamental to greenhouse gas emissions where they researchers conduct an examination of empirical or rather quantitative quantifications of the budget of the planetary energy that was developed by Arrhenius between the years 1859 and 1927 and Guy Callendar between the years 1898 and 1964. Nonetheless, although the article is quite informative with regard to prediction of the impact of global warming, the Earth Systems Models (EMS) it applies in the forecast of the impact of climate change is quite critical (Anderson, Hawkins, and Jones 179). The trustworthiness of the models is fairly in doubt as it was remarked by Gregor Betz who was one of the great researchers. Gregor outlined that the use of discrete simulations to which the ESM models larges applies to result in individually relevant or plausible projections lacks clarity. With respect to Gregor’s remarks, the recent results released by these models show that the rise in temperature in the course of the 21st century will range between 1.0 to 3.7 degrees Celsius; this is dependent on the greenhouse gases that are expected to be emitted in the future. When the statistical characteristics of the earth system models are put into consideration besides observation of the past global warming, the projection of the global temperatures are expected to hit above 2.0 degrees Celsius beyond the preindustrial times expected for emission scenarios at the higher level which is however preventable at low emission scenario. The above analysis tries to bring out the sense of the trustworthiness of the model of projection of the global warming as the ESM models by the likes of Andersons are of concern. That said, the bottom line is there is larger complexity in the climate system far beyond the greenhouse paradigm that researchers Anderson, Hawkins and Philip are trying to bring about. Appropriate forecast of the change in the climate system can only be achieved by a broad consideration which should also entail calculation of the change in the circulation of the ocean 1 and atmosphere, plants’ CO2 sequestration, the ice and snow melting among other considerations. The challenge of narrow viewpoint on global warming not only lies in the works of Anderson Philip and Hawkins but also a significant challenge to other research works such as corner Adams research work on controlling global warming, Pablo and Mercedes works on assessment of the impact of renewable energy deployment on local sustainability, Howel and august research on global warming, Mark's work on reviewing solutions to air pollution, global warming, and energy security and among other research works. For instance, when corner Adam et al. talk about how young people engage with climate change and the role of values, knowledge, trusted communicators and message framing, they ignore the major factor of global warming having a broad stakeholding and the young people are not the only stakeholders. Controlling global warming is multidimensional and requires the efforts of the entire societal demographics to achieve right from young people to old people and other stakeholders such as businesses and industries (Mark 150). On the other hand, renewable energy does not offer a complete solution to global warming as outlined by Pablo and Mercedes but a very small fraction of it and thus also calls for a multidisciplinary approach to controlling and preventing the effects of climate change (Del Río, Pablo, and Burguillo 1328). In conclusion, global warming is a significant challenge facing the 21st century generation and which is expected to heighten its effects in the coming centuries if not critically studied and addressed in the right manner. The narrow view of this subject could be the major underlying problem affecting a permanent solution to the problem of climate change. A multidisciplinary approach to the problem will offer great opportunities to critically understand 1 the entire problem and its impact and result not to partial and ‘temporary’ solutions but a lasting solution. 1 Works cited Anderson, Thomas R., Ed Hawkins, and Philip D. Jones. "CO2, the greenhouse effect and global warming: from the pioneering work of Arrhenius and Callendar to today's Earth System Models." Endeavour 40.3 (2016): 178-187. Del Río, Pablo, and Mercedes Burguillo. "Assessing the impact of renewable energy deployment on local sustainability: Towards a theoretical framework." Renewable and sustainable energy reviews 12.5 (2008): 1325-1344. Jacobson, Mark Z. "Review of solutions to global warming, air pollution, and energy security." Energy & Environmental Science 2.2 (2009): 148-173. I had to use three sources , I found it challenging doing it only with one source . ру Critical AnalysisEvaluation.docx Х Word ADD CREATE RESUBMIT Private comments Sep 19 You include a lot of information that might be very useful for your research paper. However, your current paper does not seem to follow all of the requirements for the Critical Analysis/Evaluation paper. Remember to decide on "criteria” that you expect most of your sources to follow in order to be considered credible. Consider only focusing on three to four main criteria and describe the importance of each. Then, analyze your source against this criteria with specific examples or quotes. Add private comment... ?
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GLOBAL WARMING
Global warming which is also commonly renowned as climate change has become one of the
greatest subjects of discussion in the current century due to the threatening impact it presents not
only to the current generation but also to the future generations. Researches by various authors
and researchers such as Anderson, Hawkins and Philip found that global warming has been on
the rise over the years causing climate system increased warming. Research indicates that human
activity has been the major contributor to this effect and according to researchers like Corner
Adams, Pablo, and Mercedes among many others, the effects of climate change can as well be
eliminated by human actions such as sensitization of eco-friendly lifestyles which involves the
use of environmentally friendly resources. Nevertheless, it is equally important to have a critical
understanding of the causes and impact of climate change for...


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