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The Soul Story The session I attend and participated on is called Soul Story. It took place on the Fine Art building. University Ministry were organizing the session. The session was about personal stories from students and faculty. There were six persons including myself who told stories. The theme was about forgiveness and all the participants were emotional on their stories due to them being personal and related to hearts. In this paper, I will analyze how the use of pathos in Jaqueline Romo’s story was effective and how the delivery and organization help her to make her story great. Jaqueline shared his story about his father who was in prison during the time of her childhood. The organization was clear in her story. She started the story by saying that the story about her father who she used to hate in the past and talked about how everything is changing with time due to the changing that are happening. This was clover because she after that talked about how her father was not was with her and siblings when they were young and needed him. The structure she used showing smart way of organization. She did not want the audiences to hate her father because the goal of story was to tell how she forgave her father. The delivery of Jaqueline’s story also help her to get the people attention and show the concept of pathos. During she was talking about the story she mentioned how she was four years old and how she was the oldest of her siblings. She had and still have full responsibility of her siblings because she is the oldest. She remembered the past days and that her voice to change and she was on the verge of tears. all of the audiences react with her story and almost everyone was so emotional with that moments.
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