7.1 Tompkins-Style Synthesis Essay Assignment

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7.1 Tompkins-Style Synthesis Essay Assignmen

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Warming Up for Your Final Tompkins-Style Synthesis Essay


In the beginning of Jane Tompkins' "Indians: Textualism, Morality, and the Problem of History," after providing some context for her relationship to the subject at hand, she identifies and describes a specific problem that must be resolved. She asserts that it "concerns the difference point of view makes when people are giving accounts of events, whether first or second hand. The problem is that if all accounts of events are determined through and through by the observer's frame of reference, then one will never know, in any given case, what really happened" (Tompkins 102). She then takes her reluctant readers (colleagues on the other side of the "theory wars") on an adventure through extensive research of secondary and primary sources--even firsthand accounts--which help her to identify the problem and discover much about herself. Ultimately, she formulates a solution based on analyzing and evaluating a variety of sources. In essence, she synthesizes the knowlege and experience to come to a conclusion that "Reasons must be given, evidence adduced, authorities cited, and analogies drawn. Being aware that facts are motivated, believing that people are always operating in side some particular framework or other [including theory and worldview] is a pertinent argument when what is under discussion is the way beliefs are grounded. But it doesn't give one leverage on the facts of a particular case" (Tompkins 118). Tompkins uses inductive reasoning and clever argumentation, persuasive appeals and rhetorical strategies, to persuade her reluctant reader that one can come to a sufficient truth on which to make moral judgements on issues that require them. She resolves "What this means for the problem I've been addressing is that I must piece together the story of European-Indian relationships as best I can, believing this version up to a point, that version not at all, another almost entirely, according to what seems reasonable and plausible, given everything else that I know" (Tompkins 118). Ultimately, she argues that the way history is taught needs to change. This is her conclusion/major claim, one that she may have had trouble arriving at without research, and one she would have been less likely to convince her reluctant reader of if she had not taken them through her epistemological adventure.

Now it is your turn to put aside any bias you may have and to "piece together" your objective research on a current question or issue facing this nation. Once you have determined your conclusion (major claim), you will work to persuade a reluctant/resistant reader to consider (maybe even accept) your position though the story of your research, as Tompkins did, with advanced analysis, evaluation and synthesis of a variety of perspectives. Through your close work with Tompkins' text, you were introduced to a nuanced, inductive argument--something you are now challenged to do. Tompkins, in particular, provides an excellent model for the project you are about to undertake.


  1. Use Tompkins' essay as a model for your own.
  2. From the list below, choose ONE of the issues facing the United States. I have identified the issue and provided you with required sources, which you must analyze, evaluate, compare, and synthesize in your paper.
  3. While you may already have a position on the issue you select, do not formulate your conclusion/major claim until thoroughly researching a diversity of perspectives on the issue. Practice the critical thinking skills you have learned in this course and keep an open mind. You may want to review previous modules, but you should give your mind and heart over to the research and the process of discovery--about the issue and about yourself. Tompkins shares a lot with her readers, and this in turn strengthens her argument. You should do the same.
  4. Conduct extensive research on the question/problem and distinguish between primary, secondary, and tertiary sources (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site., as Tompkins did, and then narrow them down to best represent a diversity of perspectives in your paper. You are not restricted to U.S. sources. You must analyze and synthesize five perspectives in addition to the ones you are given to total 8 perspectives. Tertiary sources will undoubtedly be needed and used, but they do not count in the 8 required perspectives (because they do not represent perspectives).
  5. Once you determine your conclusion/major claim, identify your audience, which should be uninformedand/or resistant to your position. Like Tompkins, you are going to take them through your research to lead them to your conclusion.
  6. Use inductive reasoning and Tompkins' structure as a model for the writing of your essay:
    • narrate history and personal relationship (experiential, observational, and or intellectual) to the question/problem; if you have no history or relationship to the issue, you may use someone you know--be creative--as want to, like Tompkins, begin with a strong appeals to pathos and ethos to engage your readers;
    • establish broader, national context for question/problem--this is your kairos;
    • present/define question/problem;
    • summarize, analyze, compare, and evaluate authors AND their arguments representing a diversity of perspectives (key: it is not enough to look at the primary text, as you must look at the writer and the original source of publication to evaluate bias, as Tompkins did);
    • synthesize research and response to it;
    • present your conclusion, your resolution or solution to the question/problem (which may side with one or more of your sources), and provide reasons and evidence to support it--this should be a minimum of two, well-developed pages, not just a final paragraph;
    • if applicable, share any new question/s or problem/s encountered as a result of your research and critical thinking (as Tompkins did in her last paragraph).
  7. Adapt Tompkins' style and tone with your own; it is particularly effective for a resistant audience, a way of showing (rather than "telling") and persuading them to arrive at your conclusion. Yes, you may use "I," as you are taking your audience through your epistemological adventure, but be strategic with it.
  8. Note: Remember, rarely is this type of argument (often called "Rogerian" as well) is NOT meant to utterly convince an audience; in fact, it is enough to just get a resistant audience to reconsider their own position/perspective in light of reading your comprehensive research and synthesis. One might also say that many people do not have fully informed opinions on subjects--this paper counters that. Arguments at this level are not about "winning," and this is not a course in debate. This is about persuading an uninformed or reluctant reader (one who does not agree with you) to reconsider their position.
  9. TIP: Your reader should not know your position until the end of the paper; as Tompkins did, you are arguing inductively. Also, do not insult your uninformed/reluctant audience. Tone matters. Most of you will review Tompkins before starting this.

List of Contemporary Issues Facing the United States and Required Sources

You must choose one of the following three options for your paper--papers not on one of these topics will receive a zero.

(Note: While the Grossmont College Databases, especially Opposing Viewpoints, are excellent and should be used for your paper, you should also have no problem finding a plethora of perspectives on any of these current issues.

A. Reparations to African-Americans for Slavery

Required Sources:

  1. "The Case for Reparations," (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site. by Ta-Nehisi Coates
  2. "The Case Against Reparations," (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site. by Kevin D. Williamson.
  3. "Millennials May Eventually Shift Public Opinion on Slavery Reparations," (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site. PBS News Hour.
  4. Jordan Anderson, Letter to P.H. Anderson, (August 7, 1865) (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site.

B. Judge Brett Kavanaugh's Confirmation to the Supreme Court

Required Sources:

  1. "Why Judge Kavanaugh Should Be Confirmed to the Supreme Court" by Travis Weber and Gacek, The Family Research Council: EF18H23.pdf
  2. "The Boy's Club that Protects Brett Kavanaugh" (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site. by Emily Witt
  3. "Trump Picked Kavanaugh. How Will He Change the Supreme Court," (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site. Politico Magazine. (You are required to use two of these perspectives)
  4. "I Wrote Some of the Stolen Memos That Brett Kavanaugh Liked to the Senate About," (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site. by Lisa Graves, Slate.
  5. If you are shooting for an A on this paper, you must watch and use the testimonies of Judge Kavanaugh and Dr. Ford, available on YouTube. It is suggested that everyone at excerpt part of them.

C. Hip-Hop in the United States

  1. "Can Hip-Hop Inspire a New Generation of Architects?" (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site.
  2. (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site."Jazz Trumpeter Wynton Marsalis Calls Rap Music 'more damaging than a statue of Robert E. Lee'," (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site. by Ben Kaye.
  3. "This Is America," (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site.by Childish Gambino.
  4. "How Hip-Hop Holds Blacks Back," (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site. John H. McWhorter


Final essay should be:

  1. a clear response to ALL of the directions;
  2. 8-12 pages in length;
  3. in correct MLA format and style, including in-text citations and the Works Cited page (do not include a cover page);
  4. well organized with effective transitions between ideas and paragraphs;
  5. efficient with regards to close work with sources, including, but not limited to, precise and concise summary and the smooth integration of direct quotes, block quotes, and paraphrases;
  6. the product of original, deep critical thinking, both with regards to content and form.
  7. meticulously proofread and primarily free of sentence-level errors;
  8. contain a minimum of eight sources representing diverse perspectives (including the ones I have provided).
  9. contain additional tertiary research.

This essay will be run through VeriCite. The program ensures originality by comparing submissions to billions of sources of academic content, publisher’s content, and against your own submissions—far beyond just Grossmont and Cuyamaca. Papers receiving a VeriCite score over 15% may result in a zero on the assignment and academic probation from the college. A VeriCite report on an essay below 15% is usually acceptable A high plagiarism percentage on VeriCite is typically over 25% (yellow, orange or red), and it almost always represents academic fraud. Please do your own work, handle your sources responsibly, and contact me if you have any questions or concerns.

Additional Review and Resources

For this assignment, I assume you know how to do college-level research. If you feel as though your last English course did not prepare you for the type of research and critical work with sources required by this assignment, below are some resources you may find helpful:


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Rubric for Final Essay

Rubric for Final Essay


This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThis essay is a comprehensive response to the directions and illustrates a deep understanding of Tompkins' argument (it is modeled after it); the author makes a nuanced inductive argument that effectively uses the rhetorical situation, persuasive appeals, and targeted rhetorical strategies to persuade an uninformed/reluctant audience.

150.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe essay is 8-12 pages in length. Long block quotes are not used to meet page count.

50.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe essay is in correct MLA format and style, including in-text citations and the Works Cited page (a cover page is not included). This is CR/NC.

50.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe essay is well organized with effective transitions between ideas and paragraphs.The audience should be clearly guided through the argument.

50.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe author works closely and critically with a minimum of 8 different perspectives /sources, including, but not limited to introduction (including AMS), summary, and rhetorical strategies of analysis, comparison, and synthesis of each source; as well as the smooth integration of direct quotes, block quotes, and paraphrases. Quotes are not awkwardly dropped in and are are not used to begin or end paragraphs.Direct work with the texts is a must.

100.0 pts

This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeThe essay is meticulously proofread and primarily free of sentence-level errors.Essay must represent advanced, college-level reasoning, reading, and writing skills.

100.0 pts

Tutor Answer

School: UC Berkeley


Student’s Name
Instructor’s Name
Reparations to African-Americans for Slavery
My grandfather’s name is Jake Darnell. He was born on July 17th, 1902 and he is still
alive up to now, thanks to God. Jake, did not live to be a slave but his father who is my great
grandfather, born in 1835 was a slave. From some of the saddest discussions and conversations
that I could randomly have with my grandfather, Jake, I had fragmentary learned that my greatgrandfather had worked in a white’s American farm in Westville, New Jersey, United States.
When he was a slave, he never got any special treatment whatsoever. Him, his wife, and thirteen
children among them, my grandfather was never fed well, and they never received any
medication but instead left for dead in case the strong flu came along. He was also never paid
any wages even though they productively toiled their bodies and muscles out for the White slave
owner in his farm. It was during this conditions therefore that my grandfather lost his mother
when he was young and three of his siblings; one sister and two brothers from the strong flu and
cholera due to the poor conditions they were living in. I had always been interested therefore of
knowing the whole story from my grandfather, more so his life after he had grown up.
One night of 16th December 2015, I sat down with my grandfather and he narrated to me
the story of his life pertaining to his life after slavery. When my grandfather was young, they
owned a 20-acre piece of land which had been obtained by his father after she escaped from
slavery and got a small job where he was paid 20 dollars a month and he got the land on credit in
the countryside of Mississippi. He was however accused in 1924 of not having paid an
accumulative tax of over $3,500 and served with papers. Since he was poor, he had no lawyer
and he did not know how to read. The land was then taken away by the government including all
the cows and goats they were rearing without consideration of anything from his children to his
family. Jake and his siblings were then rendered homeless and this led to them not going to
school. He explained to me that it was typical for Black Americans not to attempt school in the
1920’s more so in Mississippi area due to the high rates of racism that existed.

The high levels of segregation in schools around where my grandfather lived with his
family made him and his siblings not to attend schools. He tells me that, “there was a lot of
mockery and people would look at us like we had killed the president and ate his flesh.” They
had no finances whatsoever since his father had not saved any cash since he was a slave for the
whole of his life. Jake and his other siblings, therefore, worked at a certain farm so that they
could get something to eat and wear. Jake learned how to read and write on his own and when he
was the age of thirty-five, he joined the army. He did not tell me how he did this but he says that
it was not easy and he needed someplace to get lost from all the misery. My grandfather then
fought in Afghanistan as well as in Iraq and later in World War II. After World War II, he then
headed back home thinking that everything had changed only to find the Jim Crow Laws being
Being in his late forty’s, Jake decides to pull out of the Army since the whites were
superior to the blacks and he feared for his life. He then finds a simple job as a waiter, married,
and started his family. In 1960, Jake decides to buy a house for his family in North Lawndale
where most of the people from the black race lived. He bought the house for $28,000. After six
months, the boiler broke down. Normally this would have been the job of the owner but since he
had bought the house on a contractual basis, he had to lose the house again. He suffered a lot
until 1967 when the Jim Crow Laws were dropped. He was now able to get a legal mortgage
from another neighborhood.
From his story, my grandfather, therefore, tells me the about the fact that they need to be
compensated by the government for what they have gone through as a result of slavery which
triggered rac...

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Wow this is really good.... didn't expect it. Sweet!!!!

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