Read and critique the essay below. Critique essay as well as quality of writing.

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Question description

Read and critique the essay attatched below. Has to be at least 2-3 pages and MLA cited. Please use plenty of outside sources, stats, and data to support the thesis. Essay and essay outline files are all attached along with notes taken about the essay.

outline for essay

https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1595941/down...

article to critique

https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file...

notes from article

https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file...


topic sentence examples/ideas

https://modesto.instructure.com/courses/18533/file...


titles and hooks

https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1596090/down...


main points to include

https://modesto.instructure.com/files/1591622/down...


Also fill out this outline based off of your own essay. Attached below. You will need username and log in for the links. Will be provided when tutor chosen.

OUTLINE FOR ESSAY 1 – HERE’S THE MAP!!!! TITLE: Try to make it intriguing and put some thought into it. Paragraph 1 – Introduction Hook: Background information Thesis: What is your opinion about the quality of Garretson’s argument? Paragraph 2 – The Summary Topic Sentence: What is the essay about? List her main points and evidence Health – Determine what evidence you should mention Environment – What evidence should you mention? Animal Abuse – What evidence should you mention? Paragraph 3 – Quality of Evidence Topic Sentence: Is her evidence strongly convincing or weak? Determine what specific points you will make about it (bullet points) Use a quotation in this paragraph Paragraph 4 – Quality of Writing Style Topic Sentence: What is effective and strong in her writing, and what is weak and which is stronger? Determine what specific points you will make about her writing style (bullet points) Use a quotation in this paragraph Paragraph 5 – Logical Fallacies and Appeals / Counterargument (you can make this 2 paragraphs if you want Topic Sentence: Does she use fallacies/appeals that weaken her argument, or does she use them effectively? ? CONCLUSION Sum up Restate the thesis in fresh language Try to have a strong last sentence – also called the parting shot.

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Outstanding Job!!!!

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