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Hello, am working on a research about using nano materials in my case am using Aluminum oxide in concrete. here is attached is chapter 1 which is introduction. what I need is to revise it and add more details develop all the paragraphs by rewriting them in a very strong academic way because I used a lot of adjective and mu advisor said I have to see someone who could help me to rewrite it using strong and academic vocabulary. Second, I did talk about the nano in the history of nanoparticles section but I talk about it 9th century then I jumped to 60's and 70's, is this paragraph should to be develop by writing about what happened to the nano in between 9th century and 60's.Third after in the same section I talked about compressive strength by using nano and water absorption what I need you more that revise those paragraphs is to write about the flexural strength by using the aluminum oxide and talk about the concrete porosity by using it too. lastly, Develop the literature review.
Note: Need very special work since this paper are very important to me, so Please revise and rewrite everything in academic way and take off a lot of adjective. Do not copy others work and do not forget to add your references for anything that you will add. after he work done I will read it carefuly so if am not satisfied with it I will drop it but if your work is very good I will give you tip also I will work with you again to write chapter 2,3,4, and 5.
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