I need my essay proof read, I also need a solid conclusion

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the concluding must match my thesis, I have the entire essay set up in the structure I want as well as topic sentences I want and I DO NOT want my essay to be sooooo damn different that I might as well have done it myself?

Please do not change my intro thesis

You can add sentences the the body paragraphs without changing my topic sentence or messsing up my cling sentences

I have began the conclusion and I have 3 sentences so that your set up for the correct idea

Please just a simple proof read and add like 3 sentences to each body so that I meet page requirements

At least a solid 4 pages

I have 3

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Proheim
School: Duke University

Please find attached the completed assignment. There is an intext citation you have used (Peterson, 2013), which book does it come from, since you have not mentioned it? I need that to put in the works cited section
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In the article, This School Focus on teaching students happiness’ Not Math
written by Adele Peters regarding the grand opening of a school near Chenia, India
named RiverBend. The main goal of their mission is to acknowledge their student’s
character as well as personality. The reasoning behind this is the hope that their
students will discover what makes them happy. In other words, their expectation is to
keep more individuals happy which will drive their ambition directed towards learning as
explained by Peters. Yet, according to Victor Frankl’s book Mans Search for Meaning, it
may not be able to provide a full successful life source of positive emotion, as
happiness is acquired individually. However, it could help with guiding individuals on the
correct path towards happiness, which would come into play after they graduate. This
means that it can help provide a clearer understanding of the happiness concept and
how to achieve it in life. Everyone needs to live a happy life and if proper guidance is
offered on how to stay happy, which is basically by avoiding events that make one sad
and engaging in the correct ways of life, then they can stay happy. It is also worth
understanding that one cannot stay happy by making others sad. Happiness needs to
be shared and therefore, by engaging in events that make others happy, one can also
stay happy. With that being said, based on opinions from Frankl’s reading, it is likely he

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Thanks, good work

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