Problem-solutions Essay


Question Description

Prompt : many mental health experts are concerned that excessive Internet use can lead to health issues, such as depression and anxiety. What are some ways to avoid these consequences ?

Topic : Body shaming

Typical method of organization

- Introductory Paragraph : introduces the topic and prepares the readers by including : hook, background info, thesis statement

- Body Para #1 : Describe the problem in more detail by stating

+ What the problem is ?

+Who it affects and how it affects them ?

+reasons why is it still a problem

-Body Para #2 : Describe the proposed solution to the problem by including

+ a clear description of the solution

+reasons, evidence, or examples why the solution would work

-Body Para #3: explains why another solution would not work as well as describing

+an alternative solution

+why some people think it would work

+reasons and examples to show how this idea will not work as well as the proposed solution

-Concluding paragraph: brings the essay to the close by

+restating the thesis and the main idea of each paragraph

+reminding readers of the importance of the topic

+ending with a recommendation of something people can do to solve the problem

Tutor Answer

School: UC Berkeley

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Running head: BODY SHAMING


Body Shaming
Student’s Name
University Affiliation


Body Shaming: introduction

Body shaming is the practice or the action of humiliating someone by merely making
critical comments or by making mocking comments about body size or shape (Daye, Webb, &
Jafari, 2014). It is also viewed as an expression of criticism or mockery about body size or shape.
The Internet is disgracing our health and giving us health issues such as anxiety and depression
among others. Many people wonder how and when the internet is shaming our bodies. It is direct
and straightforward, but many ignore the facts about it because of the benefits (Hope, 2017) they
get from using the internet. Regardless of the many benefits of using the internet, which cannot be
avoided in the 21st century as technology is being integrated into every life aspect, excessive use
of the internet creates health issues. The health issues related to excessive use of internet set in
slowly unnoticed until the health hazards are at an alarming level and that is when a person realises
that internet is surpassing his or her health by a very significant margin placing them at risk of
health complications. Spending a long time using the internet without physical exercises leads to
obesity which in return has high chances of causing anxiety and depression as it is stressing. This
research paper aims at establishing and...

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