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I am studying ENG1101. I need someone to modify my essays(MLA). I am a international student, my grammer and works cited is bad. I hope you to modify grammer and content better but not too much. And a good works cited. Each essays about 550 words

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Yexin Shi 1 Yexin Shi Ben P.Rebertson,Ph.D.,Professor of English ENG-1101(8.00AM)——Format Assignment 9/6/2018 In Favor of Gun Control From my perspective, I am in favor of gun control, because I think that gun control is not serious in America. According to the survey, the U.S. has a higher rate of gun homicides than most countries, there are at least one shooting every day in the United States in average and nearly half of all U.S. citizens own guns, which are easy to cause shooting accident. As a result, in my opinion, American government should strengthen the power of gun control. Then I will express my opinion and reasons in this article. Some of Americans do not have a well gun sense. So we always heard about some news about some innocent people are killed in shooting accident. On February 14, 2018, a gunman opened fire at Marjory Stoneman Douglas High School in Parkland, Florida, killing seventeen students and staff members and injuring seventeen others. How terrible about it! After this accident, the shooting sparked unprecedented demands for gun control and spurred the founding of Never Again MSD, a political action committee founded by students from the school to demand Yexin Shi 2 legislative action from lawmakers on firearms. If we have some laws to limit these violent, we would not see too much shooting accidents nearby. The United States has too few restrictions on the legal firing of its citizens, which is a common situation in most states of the US. American citizens can fire when they meet the situation, such as being intruded private residence, being subjected to personal threats or in an uncontrollable situation. Maybe it strengthens citizens’ ability to defend themselves. However I don’t think it is fair to everybody. Is it meaning that I can fire to anyone who I think he is a criminal and then I have no legal sanction? There is no doubt that the answer is NO! In addition, there are fewer restrictions on police shootings in the United States; American law gives them a great deal of power, allowing them to subdue suspects in the first place. As a result, in the face of police law enforcement, you have better to follow the instructions of the police, or you could easily be charged with obstruction of law or contempt with serious consequences. According to the survey, there are about 400 innocent people is shot by policeman in the United States every year, among which 98 percent are male, 56 percent are white, 42 percent are black, and 53 percent are young people aged 18 to 30, which sounds terrible On the other hand, I am from China, whose government has many serious laws to control guns. Guns are absolutely forbidden in the hands of the Chinese, you cannot see guns under normal circumstances, even policeman without guns. Maybe it has Yexin Shi 3 some disadvantages, but Shootings are rare in China. So I think Chinese government do it better than American government about controlling guns. In short, I hope that American government can strengthen the power of guns controlling, which not only protect citizens in their country but also protect national security. Yexin Shi 4 Work Cited Sun Lv. Why is Obama again calling for gun legislation today? Website. Zhihu. 6/21/2018. Yexin Shi 1 Yexin Shi Prof. Robertson ENG-1101(MWF 8 a.m.) —— Essay 2 9/23/2018 Against Gun Control Control is the set of laws that governments use their power to limit their citizens to own guns, which has many advantages in most country. However, do you know more than half of American against gun control? (Huffington Post n.p.) Maybe someone think it is unbelievable that gun control is very useful way to limit the gun, which can result in dangers, but there are still more than half of American against it. From my perspective, American against gun control because of these aspects: laws, self-defense, government and so on. American citizens have right to keep and bear Arms. Second Amendment to the United States Constitution announced, “A well regulated Militia being necessary to the security of a free State, the right of the people to keep and bear Arms shall not be infringed.”, which is a significant part of United States Bill of Rights. As time went on after this amendment had announced, many American citizens accepted and agreed that gun rights are part of the American tradition. (Hofstadter n.p.) And they always bought a gun for themselves as gifts when they celebrated a holiday. As a result, I think government cannot use Gun Control to deprive of citizens’ right of owning guns. Yexin Shi 2 Citizens need to own guns to ensure their self-defense capability. According to the survey, the average population density in the United States in 2010 was 87.5 people per square mile. (United States Census n.p.) In addition, it is widely acknowledged that The United States has a large land area, which means when citizens meet emergency and the police may not be able to arrive in time, they have ability to protect themselves well. Besides, guns can help citizens to intimidate offender. For example, if the law allows citizens to have guns, and there are many citizens to have weapons, the deterrent will be enormous. For example, if one night some offenders want to rob for money or valuables, they need to choose between families with guns and without guns. Which one do you think they will choose? There is no doubt that they will choose family with no guns because it is easier to achieve their aim. Widespread gun ownership has created a large economic chain of interests in the United States, which provide a large amount of profit to American government and create a lot of job opportunity. For example, in 2016, the federal tax revenue from gun sales was $384.3 billion, and the state received nearly $2,695 billion in taxes. This sum amounts to $650 billion in taxes, which is of course unceasing revenue for both the federal government and the state government. (NSSF n.p.) Moreover, more than 300, 000 directly or indirectly related jobs have been created in the arms manufacturing industry. (NSSF n.p.) Given the economic benefits of guns, I'm even Yexin Shi 3 less in favor of gun control. On account of gun control can make the impact on the U.S. economy, which may cause social instability more seriously. Yexin Shi 4 Works Cited James, Madison. United States Bill of Rights. Archived on September 25, 1789. Retrieved December 15, 1791. Zhe, Cao. Why doesn't the U.S. government have strict control over guns and ammunition? 2016. 9/18/2018. Kathleen, Schuster. 8 facts about gun control in the US.2018. 9/18/2018. Ingraham, Christopher. “New evidence confirms what gun rights advocates have said for a longtime about crime.” The Washington Post. Washington Post. July 2017. Web. September 18, 2018. Greeklike and Marc, Gertz, in The Journal of Criminal Law & Criminology, Northwestern University School of Law, Volume 86, Number 1, 1995 Richard, Hofstadter, "America As A Gun Culture" , American Heritage, 21 October 1970 Shi 1 Yexin Shi Prof. Robertson ENG-1101(MWF 8 a.m.) —— Essay 3 10/15/2018 Preventing Terrorism Do you know the September 11 attacks? The September 11 attacks were a series of four coordinated terrorist attacks by the Islamic terrorist group al-Qaeda against the United States on the morning of Tuesday, September 11, 2001, which killed 2,996 people, injured over 6,000 others, and caused at least $10 billion in infrastructure and property damage. In Addition, people died of 9/11-related cancer and respiratory diseases in the months and years following the attacks. As a result, I am in favor of preventing terrorism because it is terrible to get so serious damage. The reason why I am in favor of preventing terrorism is these attacks cause casualties, social panic and economic loss. Every terrorist attack results in a large number of casualties. Such as the September 11 attacks, 125 people were killed instantly at Pentagon and over 2600 people died in this attack site. The number of deaths from terrorist attacks has risen nine fold since the start of the century, and the number of terrorist attacks and deaths around the world has risen dramatically since the American invasion of Iraq in 2003.According to statistics, a total of 32,658 people were killed in terrorist attacks worldwide in 2014, an increase of 80% compared to 2013.The attacks took place mainly in Iraq, Afghanistan, Nigeria, Pakistan and Syria, five countries with large Muslim populations. Although the death toll has fallen in recent years, the number of terrorist attacks has increased year by year. Shi 2 Terrorism can easily cause social panic. Take "9/11" as an example. After the event, the American society was full of terror and danger, and the American people began to worry about their living environment. Their lives have been changed by the terrorist attacks. They no longer prefer a convenient plane, but choose a car, which they think is safe. But that's not the case. According to some estimates, 40, 000 people die on U.S. highways each year, far more than are killed in U.S. in-flight accidents. The government should guide the mass media to deliver the right public information, guide the right public opinion tendency and dredge the audience's emotions. Terrorism has a huge impact on the world economy, and every terrorist attack causes an economic downturn. "9/11" is a good example. The first impact of the attack on the economy was uncertainty about the consequences of U.S. economic growth and military retaliation, which delayed investment by investors in developed countries and led to rising unemployment. The global stock market downturn, affecting residents' income levels, resulting in insufficient aggregate demand; It also raises the risk premium for the emerging markets most affected by the slowdown in the us, forcing them to pay more for the recovery. Moreover, the biggest impact on the economy of a terrorist attack is a shock to confidence It is difficult to grasp the real cost of terrorism to the world. U.S. spending on domestic security has risen from $46 billion to $76 billion since 2001.Airports and ports have also stepped up their security prosecutions. At Bremen port, Germany's largest container terminal, each container must undergo laser inspection. Airlines, shippers and shippers not only have to spend time fighting terrorism, security checks and other procedures have also reduced the efficiency of the entire international trading system. These invisible damages are difficult to quantify. Shi 3 Work Sited Pritchard, John. September 11, 2001, terrorist attacks. December 2016. < b=ers> Salem Press. “September 11, 2001, terrorist attacks." The 2000s in America (Online Edition).2013 Badertscher, Eric. NEW YORK'S HISTORY. August 2017. < 150714&db=khh> Malley, Robert; Finer, Jon. The Long Shadow of 9/11. July 2018. h&AN=131477897 Lutz, James M. Terrorism: origins and evolution / James M. Lutz and Brenda J. Lutz. September 2rd 6 oy.648993252&db=cat05550a Shi 4 oy.903509071&db=cat05550a ...
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