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‘Two Concepts of Liberty’
Isaiah Berlin
Isaiah Berlin’s essay ‘Two Concepts of Liberty’* is one of the most
important pieces of post-war political philosophy. It was originally given
as a lecture in Oxford in 1958 and has been much discussed since then. In
this extract from the lecture Berlin identifies the two different concepts
of freedom – negative and positive – which provide the framework for his
wide-ranging discussion. Negative freedom is, roughly, a matter of which
doors lie open to you, it is concerned exclusively with opportunities;
positive freedom is a question of whether or not you can go through the
doors, whether you are master of your life. Berlin points out that
historically the concept of positive freedom has been used to control and
repress individuals in the name of liberty.
I
To coerce a man is to deprive him of freedom – freedom from what? Almost
every moralist in human history has praised freedom. Like happiness and
goodness, like nature and reality, the meaning of this term is so porous that
there is little interpretation that it seems able to resist. I do not propose to
discuss either the history or the more than two hundred senses of this protean
word, recorded by historians of ideas. I propose to examine no more than two
of these senses – but those central ones, with a great deal of human history
behind them, and, I dare say, still to come. The first of these political senses of
freedom or liberty (I shall use both words to mean the same), which (following
much precedent) I shall call the ‘negative’sense, is involved in the answer to the
question ‘What is the area within which the subject – a person or group of
persons – is or should be left to do or be what he is able to do or be, without
interference by other persons?’ The second, which I shall call the positive
sense, is involved in the answer to the question ‘What, or who, is the source of
control or interference, that can determine someone to do, or be, one thing
rather than another?’ The two questions are clearly different, even though the
answers to them may overlap.
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The notion of ‘negative’ freedom
I am normally said to be free to the degree to which no human being interferes
with my activity. Political liberty in this sense is simply the area within which a
man can act unobstructed by others. If I am prevented by other persons from
doing what I could otherwise do, I am to that degree unfree; and if this area is
contracted by other men beyond a certain minimum, I can be described as
being coerced, or, it may be, enslaved. Coercion is not, however, a term that
covers every form of inability. If I say that I am unable to jump more than ten
feet in the air, or cannot read because I am blind, or cannot understand the
darker pages of Hegel, it would be eccentric to say that I am to that degree
enslaved or coerced. Coercion implies the deliberate interference of other
human beings within the area in which I could otherwise act. You lack political
liberty or freedom only if you are prevented from attaining a goal by human
beings.1 Mere incapacity to attain a goal is not lack of political freedom.2 This
is brought out by the use of such modern expressions as ‘economic freedom’
and its counterpart, ‘economic slavery’. It is argued, very plausibly, that if a
man is too poor to afford something on which there is no legal ban – a loaf of
bread, a journey round the world, recourse to the law courts – he is as little free
to have it as he would be if it were forbidden him by Law. If my poverty were a
kind of disease, which prevented me from buying bread or paying for the
journey round the world, or getting my case heard, as lameness prevents me
from running, this inability would not naturally be described as a lack of
freedom, least of all political freedom. It is only because I believe that my
inability to get a given thing is due to the fact that other human beings have
made arrangements whereby I am, whereas others are not, prevented from
having enough money with which to pay for it, that I think myself a victim of
coercion or slavery. In other words, this use of the term depends on a particular
social and economic theory about the causes of my poverty or weakness. If my
lack of material means is due to my lack of mental or physical capacity, then I
begin to speak of being deprived of freedom (and not simply of poverty) only if
I accept the theory.3 If, in addition, I believe that I am being kept in want by a
specific arrangement which I consider unjust or unfair, I speak of economic
slavery or oppression. ‘The nature of things does not madden us, only ill will
does’, said Rousseau. The criterion of oppression is the part that I believe to be
played by other human beings, directly or indirectly, with or without the
intention of doing so, in frustrating my wishes. By being free in this sense I
mean not being interfered with by others. The wider the area of noninterference the wider my freedom.
This is what the classical English political philosophers meant when they
used this word.4 They disagreed about how wide the area could or should be.
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They supposed that it could not, as things were, be unlimited, because if it
were, it would entail a state in which all men could boundlessly interfere with
all other men; and this kind of ‘natural’ freedom would lead to social chaos in
which men’s minimum needs would not be satisfied; or else the liberties of the
weak would be suppressed by the strong. Because they perceived that human
purposes and activities do not automatically harmonize with one another; and,
because (whatever their official doctrines) they put high value on other goals,
such as justice, or happiness, or culture, or security, or varying degrees of
equality, they were prepared to curtail freedom in the interests of other values
and, indeed, of freedom itself. For, without this, it was impossible to create the
kind of association that they thought desirable. Consequently, it is assumed by
these thinkers that the area of men’s free action must be limited by law. But
equally it is assumed, especially by such libertarians as Locke and Mill in
England, and Constant and Tocqueville in France, that there ought to exist a
certain minimum area of personal freedom which must on no account be
violated; for if it is overstepped, the individual will find himself in an area too
narrow for even that minimum development of his natural faculties which
alone makes it possible to pursue, and even to conceive, the various ends which
men hold good or right or sacred. It follows that a frontier must be drawn
between the area of private life and that of public authority. Where it is to be
drawn is a matter of argument, indeed of haggling. Men are largely
interdependent, and no man’s activity is so completely private as never to
obstruct the lives of others in any way. ‘Freedom for the pike is death for the
minnows’; the liberty of some must depend on the restraint of others.5 Still, a
practical compromise has to be found.
Philosophers with an optimistic view of human nature, and a belief in the
possibility of harmonizing human interest, such as Locke or Adam Smith and,
in some moods, Mill, believed that social harmony and progress were
compatible with reserving a large area for private life over which neither the
state nor any other authority must be allowed to trespass. Hobbes, and those
who agreed with him, especially conservative or reactionary thinkers, argued
that if men were to be prevented from destroying one another, and making
social life a jungle or a wilderness, greater safeguards must be instituted to
keep them in their places, and wished correspondingly to increase the area of
centralized control, and decrease that of the individual. But both sides agreed
that some portion of human existence must remain independent of the sphere
of social control. To invade that preserve, however small, would be despotism.
The most eloquent of all defenders of freedom and privacy, Benjamin Constant,
who had not forgotten the Jacobin dictatorship, declared that at the very least
the liberty of religion, opinion, expression, property, must be guaranteed
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against arbitrary invasion. Jefferson, Burke, Paine, Mill, compiled different
catalogues of individual liberties, but the argument for keeping authority at
bay is always substantially the same. We must preserve a minimum area of
personal freedom if we are not to ‘degrade or deny our nature’. We cannot
remain absolutely free, and must give up some of our liberty to preserve the
rest. But total self-surrender is self-defeating. What then must the minimum
be? That which a man cannot give up without offending against the essence of
his human nature. What is this essence? What are the standards which it
entails? This has been, and perhaps always will be, a matter of infinite debate.
But whatever the principle in terms of which the area of non-interference is to
be drawn, whether it is that of natural law or natural rights, or of utility or the
pronouncements of a categorical imperative, or the sanctity of the social
contract, or any other concept with which men have sought to clarify and
justify their convictions, liberty in this sense means liberty from: absence of
interference beyond the shifting, but always recognizable, frontier. ‘The only
freedom which deserves the name is that of pursuing our own good in our own
way’, said the most celebrated of its champions. If this is so, is compulsion ever
justified? Mill had no doubt that it was. Since justice demands that all
individuals be entitled to a minimum of freedom, all other individuals were of
necessity to be restrained, if need be by force, from depriving anyone of it.
Indeed, the whole function of law was the prevention of just such collisions: the
state was reduced to what Lassalle contemptuously described as the functions
of a night-watchman or traffic policeman.
What made the protection of individual liberty so sacred to Mill? In his
famous essay he declares that unless men are left to live as they wish ‘in the
path which merely concerns themselves’, civilization cannot advance; the
truth will not, for lack of a free market in ideas, come to light; there will be no
scope for spontaneity, originality, genius, for mental energy, for moral courage.
Society will be crushed by the weight of ‘collective mediocrity’. Whatever is
rich and diversified will be crushed by the weight of custom, by men’s constant
tendency to conformity, which breeds only ‘withered capacities’, ‘pinched and
hidebound’, ‘cramped and warped’ human beings. ‘Pagan self-assertion is as
worthy as Christian self-denial.’ ‘All the errors which a man is likely to commit
against advice and warning are far outweighed by the evil of allowing others
to constrain him to what they deem is good.’ The defence of liberty consists in
the ‘negative’ goal of warding off interference. To threaten a man with
persecution unless he submits to a life in which he exercises no choices of his
goals; to block before him every door but one, no matter how noble the
prospect upon which it opens, or how benevolent the motives of those who
arrange this, is to sin against the truth that he is a man, a being with a life of his
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own to live. This is liberty as it has been conceived by liberals in the modern
world from the days of Erasmus (some would say of Occam) to our own. Every
plea for civil liberties and individual rights, every protest against exploitation
and humiliation, against the encroachment of public authority, or the mass
hypnosis of custom or organized propaganda, springs from this individualistic, and much disputed, conception of man.
Three facts about this position may be noted. In the first place Mill confuses
two distinct notions. One is that all coercion is, in so far as it frustrates human
desires, bad as such, although it may have to be applied to prevent other,
greater evils; while non-interference, which is the opposite of coercion, is good
as such, although it is not the only good. This is the ‘negative’ conception of
liberty in its classical form. The other is that men should seek to discover the
truth, or to develop a certain type of character of which Mill approved –
fearless, original, imaginative, independent, non-conforming to the point of
eccentricity, and so on – and that truth can be found, and such character can be
bred, only in conditions of freedom. Both these are liberal views, but they are
not identical, and the connection between them is, at best, empirical. No one
would argue that truth or freedom of self-expression could flourish where
dogma crushes all thought. But the evidence of history tends to show (as,
indeed, was argued by James Stephen in his formidable attack on Mill in his
Liberty, Equality, Fraternity) that integrity, love of truth and fiery individualism grow at least as often in severely disciplined communities among, for
example, the puritan Calvinists of Scotland or New England, or under military
discipline, as in more tolerant or indifferent societies; and if this is so accepted,
Mill’s argument for liberty as a necessary condition for the growth of human
genius falls to the ground. If his two goals proved incompatible, Mill would be
faced with a cruel dilemma, quite apart from the further difficulties created by
the inconsistency of his doctrines with strict utilitarianism, even in his own
humane version of it.6
In the second place, the doctrine is comparatively modern. There seems to
be scarcely any discussion of individual liberty as a conscious political ideal
(as opposed to its actual existence) in the ancient world. Condorcet has already
remarked that the notion of individual rights is absent from the legal
conceptions of the Romans and Greeks; this seems to hold equally of the
Jewish, Chinese, and all other ancient civilizations that have since come to
light.7 The domination of this ideal has been the exception rather than the
rule, even in the recent history of the West. Nor has liberty in this sense often
formed a rallying cry for the great masses of mankind. The desire not to be
impinged upon, to be left to oneself, has been a mark of high civilization both
on the part of individuals and communities. The sense of privacy itself, of the
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area of personal relationships as something sacred in its own right, derives
from a conception of freedom which, for all its religious roots, is scarcely older,
in its developed state, than the Renaissance or the Reformation.8 Yet its
decline would mark the death of a civilization, of an entire moral outlook.
The third characteristic of this notion of liberty is of greater importance. It is
that liberty in this sense is not incompatible with some kinds of autocracy, or at
any rate with the absence of self-government. Liberty in this sense is
principally concerned with the area of control, not with its source. Just as a
democracy may, in fact, deprive the individual citizen of a great many liberties
which he might have in some other form of society, so it is perfectly conceivable
that a liberal-minded despot would allow his subjects a large measure of
personal freedom. The despot who leaves his subjects a wide area of liberty
may be unjust, or encourage the wildest inequalities, care little for order, or
virtue, or knowledge, but provided he does not curb their liberty, or at least
curbs it less than many other regimes, he meets with Mill’s specification.9
Freedom in this sense is not, at any rate logically, connected with democracy or
self-government. Self-government may, on the whole, provide a better
guarantee of the preservation of civil liberties than other regimes, and has
been defended as such by libertarians. But there is no necessary connection
between individual liberty and democratic rule. The answer to the question
‘Who governs me?’ is logically distinct from the question ‘How far does
government interfere with me?’ It is in this difference that the great contrast
between the two concepts of negative and positive liberty, in the end,
consists.10 For the ‘positive’ sense of liberty comes to light if we try to answer
the question, not ‘What am I free to do or be?’, but ‘By whom am I ruled?’ or
‘Who is to say what I am, and what I am not, to be or do?’ The connection
between democracy and individual liberty is a good deal more tenuous than it
seemed to many advocates of both. The desire to be governed by myself, or at
any rate to participate in the process by which my life is to be a controlled, may
be as deep a wish as that of a free area for action, and perhaps historically
older. But it is not a desire for the same thing. So different is it, indeed, as to
have led in the end to the great clash of ideologies that dominates our world.
For it is this – the ‘positive’ conception of liberty: not freedom from, but
freedom to – which the adherents of the ‘negative’ notion represent as being, at
times, no better than a specious disguise for brutal tyranny.
The notion of positive freedom
The ‘positive’sense of the word ‘liberty’ derives from the wish on the part of the
individual to be his own master. I wish my life and decisions to depend on
myself, not on external forces of whatever kind. I wish to be the instrument of
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my own, not of other men’s acts of will. I wish to be a subject, not an object; to be
moved by reasons, by conscious purposes which are my own, not by causes
which affect me, as it were, from outside. I wish to be somebody, not nobody; a
doer – deciding, not being decided for, self-directed and not acted upon by
external nature or by other men as if I were a thing, or an animal, or a slave
incapable of playing a human role, that is, of conceiving goals and policies of
my own and realizing them. This is at least part of what I mean when I say that
I am rational, and that it is my reason that distinguishes me as a human being
from the rest of the world. I wish, above all, to be conscious of myself as a
thinking, willing, active being, bearing responsibility for his choices and able
to explain them by reference to his own ideas and purposes. I feel free to the
degree that I believe this to be true, and enslaved to the degree that I am made
to realize that it is not.
The freedom which consists in being one’s own master, and the freedom
which consists in not being prevented from choosing as I do by other men, may,
on the face of it, seem concepts at no great logical distance from each other – no
more than negative and positive ways of saying the same thing. Yet the
‘positive’ and ‘negative’ notions of freedom historically developed in divergent
directions not always by logically reputable steps, until, in the end, they came
into direct conflict with each other.
One way of making this clear is in terms of the independent momentum
which the, initially perhaps quite harmless, metaphor of self-mastery
acquired. ‘I am my own master’; ‘I am slave to no man’; but may I not (as,
for instance, T. H. Green is always saying) be a slave to nature? Or to my own
‘unbridled’ passions? Are these not so many species of the identical genus
‘slave’ – some political or legal, others moral or spiritual? Have not men had the
experience of liberating themselves from spiritual slavery, or slavery to nature,
and do they not in the course of it become aware, on the one hand, of a self
which dominates, and, on the other, of something in them which is brought to
heel? This dominant self is then variously identified with reason, with my
‘higher nature’, with the self which calculates and aims at what will satisfy it in
the long run, with my ‘real’, or ‘ideal’, or ‘autonomous’ self, or with my self ‘at
its best’; which is then contrasted with irrational impulse, uncontrolled desires,
my ‘lower’ nature, the pursuit of immediate pleasures, my ‘empirical’ or
‘heteronomous’ self, swept by every gust of desire and passion, needing to be
rigidly disciplined if it is ever to rise to the full height of its ‘real’ nature.
Presently the two selves may be represented as divided by an even larger gap:
the real self may be conceived as something wider than the individual (as the
term is normally understood), as a social ‘whole’ of which the individual is an
element or aspect: a tribe, a race, a church, a state, the great society of the living
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and the dead and the yet unborn. This entity is then identified as being the
‘true’ self which, by imposing its collective, or ‘organic’, single will upon its
recalcitrant ‘members’, achieves its own, and, therefore, their, ‘higher’ freedom.
The perils of using organic metaphors to justify the coercion of some men by
others in order to raise them to a ‘higher’ level of freedom have often been
pointed out. But what gives such plausibility as it has to this kind of language
is that we recognize that it is possible, and at times justifiable, to coerce men in
the name of some goal (let us say, justice or public health) which they would, if
they were more enlightened, themselves pursue, but do not, because they are
blind or ignorant or corrupt. This renders it easy for me to conceive of myself
as coercing others for their own sake, in their, not my, interest. I am then
claiming that I know what they truly need better than they know it themselves.
What, at most, this entails is that they would not resist me if they were rational,
and as wise as I, and understood their interests as I do. But I may go on to claim
a good deal more than this. I may declare that they are actually aiming at what
in their benighted state they consciously resist, because there exists within
them an occult entity – their latent rational will, or their ‘true’ purpose – and
that this entity, although it is belied by all that they overtly feel and do and say,
is their ‘real’ self, of which the poor empirical self in space and time may know
nothing or little; and that this inner spirit is the only self that deserves to have
its wishes taken into account.11 Once I take this view, I am in a position to
ignore the actual wishes of men or societies, to bully, oppress, torture them in
the name, and on behalf, of their ‘real’ selves, in the secure knowledge that
whatever is the true goal of man (happiness, fulfilment of duty, wisdom, a just
society, self-fulfilment) must be identical with his freedom – the free choice of
his ‘true’, albeit submerged and inarticulate, self.
This paradox has been often exposed. It is one thing to say that I know what
is good for X, while he himself does not and even to ignore his wishes for its –
and his – sake; and a very different one to say that he has eo ipso chosen it, not
indeed consciously, not as he seems in everyday life, but in his role as a rational
self which his empirical self may not know – the ‘real’ self which discerns the
good, and cannot help choosing it once it is revealed. This monstrous
impersonation, which consists in equating what X would choose if he were
something he is not, or at least not yet, with what X actually seeks and chooses,
is at the heart of all political theories of self-realization. It is one thing to say
that I may be coerced for my own good which I am too blind to see: this may, on
occasion, be for my benefit; indeed it may enlarge the scope of my liberty; it is
another to say that if it is my good, then I am not being coerced, for I have willed
it, whether I know this or not, and am free – or ‘truly’ free – even while my poor
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earthly body and foolish mind bitterly reject it, and struggle against those who
seek however benevolently to impose it, with the greatest desperation.
This magical transformation, or sleight of hand (for which William James so
justly mocked the Hegelians), can no doubt be perpetrated just as easily with
the ‘negative’ concept of freedom, where the self that should not be interfered
with is no longer the individual with his actual wishes and needs as they are
normally conceived, but the ‘real’ man within, identified with the pursuit of
some ideal purpose not dreamed of by his empirical self. And, as in the case of
the ‘positively’ free self, this entity may be inflated into some super-personal
entity – a state, a class, a nation, or the march of history itself, regarded as a
more ‘real’ subject of attributes than the empirical self. But the ‘positive’
conception of freedom as self-mastery, with its suggestion of a man divided
against himself, has, in fact, and as a matter of the history of doctrines and of
practice, lent itself more easily to this splitting of personality into two: the
transcendent, dominant controller, and the empirical bundle of desires and
passions to be disciplined and brought to heel. This demonstrates (if
demonstration of so obvious a truth is needed) that the conception of freedom
directly derives from the view that is taken of what constitutes a self, a person,
a man. Enough manipulation with the definition of man, and freedom can be
made to mean whatever the manipulator wishes. Recent history has made it
only too clear that the issue is not merely academic.
Notes
*
This version of the essay is from A. Quinton (ed.) Political Philosophy, Oxford University
Press, Oxford Readings in Philosophy, 1967, pp.141–52. The quotations from ‘Two Concepts
of Liberty’ in the main text sometimes have a slightly different wording from this version of
the essay.
1
I do not, of course, mean to imply the truth of the converse.
2
Helvétius made this point very clearly: ‘The free man is the man who is not in irons, nor
imprisoned in a gaol, nor terrorized like a slave by the fear of punishment ... it is not lack of
freedom not to fly like an eagle or swim like a whale.’
3
The Marxist conceptions of social laws is, of course, the best-known version of this theory,
but it forms a large element in some Christian and utilitarian, and all socialist, doctrines.
4
‘A free man’, said Hobbes, ‘is he that ... is not hindered to do what he hath the will to do.’
Law is always a ‘fetter’, even if it protects you from being bound in chains that are heavier
than those of the law, say, arbitrary despotism or chaos. Bentham says much the same.
5
‘Freedom for an Oxford don’, others have been known to add, ‘is a very different thing from
freedom for an Egyptian peasant.’
This proposition derives its force from something that is both true and important, but the
phrase itself remains a piece of political claptrap. It is true that to offer political rights, or
safeguards, against intervention by the state, to men who are half-naked, illiterate, underfed,
and diseased is to mock their condition; they need medical help or education before they can
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How to Write a One‐Page Response
NOTE: There is no reason to have a heading on a response, not even your name. Your name
automatically shows in the instructor’s grade center and even a name takes up valuable space
in a one-page response.
Thesis Statement – This should be a one‐sentence statement of the position you take on the
question or the argument you intend to make. This statement should specifically lay out what you
intend to prove in your response. It should not be a vague generalization.
First paragraph begins with a topic sentence that exactly corresponds to the first point you are
trying to prove as stated in your thesis statement. Then, you present facts, details, and evidence to
prove your point or analysis. The paragraph should end with a good transition sentence.
Subsequent paragraphs should begin with a topic sentence that corresponds to the second, third,
etc. points you make in your thesis statement, corresponding exactly to the order in which you
state them in your thesis statement. In each paragraph, present facts, details, and evidence in
support of your argument. Each paragraph ends with a transition sentence.
Conclusion – This is where you restate your thesis and review the main points.
NOTE: Organization, flow, structure, grammar, and spelling checks are important.
Questions to ask before submitting an assignment:
1. Have you proofread your response?
2. Have you met the requirements of the assignment?
3. Does your thesis statement have a specific idea, debatable assertion, or argument?
4. Does your paper have supporting paragraphs to support and prove your thesis?
5. Does a topic sentence in each paragraph address the purpose of the paragraph?
6. Does each paragraph contain evidence, facts, and details to support your thesis argument?
7. Does your analysis explain the significance of the evidence, facts, or details and specifically
connect to your thesis statement?
8. Do you have logical transitions between paragraphs?
9. Have you organized your ideas?
10. Does your conclusion restate your thesis statement and contain a review of your main points?
11. Have you maintained consistent verb tense, subject‐verb agreement, pronoun‐antecedent
agreement, and sentence structure?
12. Do you use proper punctuation (no sentence fragments, run‐on sentences, comma splices, or
confusing passages) in your response paper?
13. Are there any spelling errors?
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Thesis Statement ‐ Arguing a Point
1. All thesis statements are really arguments. In an essay you are advancing and supporting a point
of view.
2. Argument is about persuading a reader to take a side on an issue.
3. An argument is an organized series of facts and material to support a point of view.
4. Arguments support opinions.
5. Arguments are not right or wrong, but graded on the basis of being well or poorly supported.
6. A well‐written argument essay should use clear, logical reasoning to persuade.
7. Argument should always focus on facts, not emotions.
Compare these two thesis statements:
The Congress is an example of a bicameral legislative body.
The Congress is a legislative body made up of opposing interests constantly forming new coalitions
in support of or opposition to the legislative agenda.
Note the difference in implied intent in these two statements.
One expresses a point of view; the other advances a position.
Be aware of your audience‐‐open‐minded, but skeptical and critical.
Audience does not turn its brains off when it reads or listens to an argument.
Student responses should:
List arguments in favor of the thesis statement.
List arguments in opposition to the thesis statement.
Note that your reader will be perfectly capable of generating reasons to support the side opposite
the side you take. You need to anticipate and defuse opposing arguments.
Steps to Writing a Thesis Statement
1. Choose a topic of interest.
2. Focus your topic on a specific point or aspect of the issue of interest that you feel you can
support.
3. A method of narrowing a topic is to define your terms.
4. List reasons in support of your thesis.
5. List reasons in opposition to your thesis.
6. Group the reasons by issue details or subject areas.
7. Organize the issue details.
8. Save the most powerful issue/argument as your last point.
This step‐by‐step process will help you write a strong, focused thesis statement.
More information on argument: Hacker, Diana. Rules for Writers. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s.
Source Material
When you incorporate material or direct quotes from outside source materials, you must site that
source giving credit to the author or source of the material or quote.
An excellent resource is:
Hacker, Diana. Rules for Writers. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s.
Some things to remember:
1. Select focused passages to quote or paraphrase in support of your argument.
2. It is your job to “unwrap” the quote. It doesn’t stand alone as proof. You must explain why it is
significant to your argument.
3. Quotes should be “woven” into the fabric of your essay. It should connect to the material.
4. You are the author, the dominant voice. The quote is there to support your thesis.
5. Do not sprinkle your essay with unexplained quotations.
6. Introduce your quotations by naming the source.
7. Tell the reader the significance, or the reason for your reference.
8. A direct quotation must be copied exactly as it appears in the original work, with every mark of
punctuation, every capitalization, every peculiarity of spelling preserved.
9. You must as a matter of honor use the quote in its proper context, and respect the intended
meaning.
How to Incorporate Outside Sources into Your Writing
Summary – If a long passage supports your argument, you may condense the main idea and edit
the supports used in your own words.
Note: A good summary is accurate, comprehensive, and independent (in the order of the
points in the original document and of the emphasis of the original document).
Paraphrase – This is restating the content of a short passage of material phrase by phrase. You
rewrite the author’s wording choice in your own words.
Note: Why would you paraphrase instead of directly quote the material?
Sometimes a great point for your argument is written in difficult language that serves you
better if simplified.
Sometimes a passage or an idea is very important to your argument, but it isn’t necessary or
desired to use the author’s exact wording.
Direct Quotation – This is a precise word‐for‐word use of the author’s original statement.
Note: Too many quotes dilute the overall effectiveness of your essay. Quotations should be
used sparingly to make great impact.
Quotes must be accurate.
As a general rule, no more than 10 to 20 percent of your essay should be composed of
direct quotations.
When to Use Direct Quotations
1. When you want to use precise, excellently written language, as well selected content in the
quote. In short, when, as a writer, you believe that no other words could adequately express
the meaning conveyed. Usually the style is perfect, vivid, and cannot be improved upon.
2. To ensure the greatest accuracy for material that is significant, or controversial, or
authoritative.
3. To set up an argument that adds to, or takes exception to the quoted source.
4. Like in a debate, when the contrast of opposing ideas makes precise wording of the author’s
ideas essential to your argument.
When You Use Too Many Quotes
It makes your essay appear to have no purpose—it looks like you added everything verbatim in
hopes of finding a purpose.
To pad the length of an essay because you failed to adequately develop a topic.
There is always the possibility that you don’t know anything about your topic, so you quote
others.
Remember that quotations supplement, but can never replace your work.
Purpose of Quotations
1. To help you amplify or clarify a point of argument.
2. To prove a specific point, or to attach weight to a theory or an opinion.
Format of Quotations
1. Use quotation marks to enclose direct quotes.
2. Set off long quotations (4 or more lines) by indenting 10 spaces from the left margin.
3. Use single quotation marks to enclose a quotation within a quotation.
4. Use quotation marks around titles of short works or italicize.
1. Periods and commas always come inside quotation marks; all other punctuation (unless part of
the quoted material) belongs outside the quotation marks.
2. If the quoted material and the entire sentence you write each require the same mark of
punctuation, use only the mark that comes first. If the punctuation marks are different, use the
stronger mark.
3. When quoting a complete sentence, capitalize the first word.
4. Do not capitalize the first word if you are quoting a fragment, or if you are introducing a short
complete sentence with a similar construction.
5. Capitalize when you introduce quoted material.
Plagiarism
Using another author’s ideas, interpretations, or words as your own is plagiarism. This is why you
must cite your source with in‐text documentation that includes a specific page reference.
A good way to introduce an outside source is to use a signal phrase alerting the reader that an
outside reference follows. Such phrasing also helps integrate an idea or direct quotation into your
writing and argument.
Omissions
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ellipses, (…) that are three spaced periods to indicate to the reader that some of the original
material has been omitted. If the ellipsis comes at the end of a sentence, then use the three periods
and any period marking or other punctuation that comes at the end of the sentence. Make sure
that the quotation that remains is grammatically correct.
You must not distort the meaning of the original passage. Example: “The United States was attacked
on 9‐11 by terrorists, nineteen of whom were from Saudi Arabia.”
You cannot change it to read: “The United States was attacked…by…Saudi Arabia.”
Interpolations (Required Changes in Quotations)
These changes are made when it is necessary to relate a pronoun to its antecedent, or to
insert a personal comment. To do this properly, you must insert the word “sic” – meaning a
word of correction. You may also make the quotation grammatically consistent with what
you have written surrounding the quotation. It’s important not to confuse your reader with
a change in tone, tense, or perspective. All interpolations must be enclosed in square
brackets, [ ].
Keys to Writing a Successful One Page Response
Incorporate Factual Points from the Readings as Proofs for Your Argument
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state the author's argument in the response. This does not mean that you should just write a summary,
remember you also need to argue a point.
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what you are arguing.
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people are too busy to read multiple pages. One page responses teaches students to write succinctly
and make sharp arguments.
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Only on rare occasions should you use first person, such as: when you are an expert, or have personally
witnessed an event, or have unique personal knowledge about an issue. It should not be used when
giving your opinion. The reader knows you are the author of the response. At this level, it is best to
avoid using it altogether.
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easily. When you do not provide all the information necessary, it looks like you are hiding something.
Critical Thinking is Important
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sides of an issue, particularly in the way that the proponents of each side would approve. Readers will
only support your argument if they believe the facts are presented fairly.
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ways to avoid plagiarism.
READING 1
‘Two Concepts of Liberty’
Isaiah Berlin
Isaiah Berlin’s essay ‘Two Concepts of Liberty’* is one of the most
important pieces of post-war political philosophy. It was originally given
as a lecture in Oxford in 1958 and has been much discussed since then. In
this extract from the lecture Berlin identifies the two different concepts
of freedom – negative and positive – which provide the framework for his
wide-ranging discussion. Negative freedom is, roughly, a matter of which
doors lie open to you, it is concerned exclusively with opportunities;
positive freedom is a question of whether or not you can go through the
doors, whether you are master of your life. Berlin points out that
historically the concept of positive freedom has been used to control and
repress individuals in the name of liberty.
I
To coerce a man is to deprive him of freedom – freedom from what? Almost
every moralist in human history has praised freedom. Like happiness and
goodness, like nature and reality, the meaning of this term is so porous that
there is little interpretation that it seems able to resist. I do not propose to
discuss either the history or the more than two hundred senses of this protean
word, recorded by historians of ideas. I propose to examine no more than two
of these senses – but those central ones, with a great deal of human history
behind them, and, I dare say, still to come. The first of these political senses of
freedom or liberty (I shall use both words to mean the same), which (following
much precedent) I shall call the ‘negative’sense, is involved in the answer to the
question ‘What is the area within which the subject – a person or group of
persons – is or should be left to do or be what he is able to do or be, without
interference by other persons?’ The second, which I shall call the positive
sense, is involved in the answer to the question ‘What, or who, is the source of
control or interference, that can determine someone to do, or be, one thing
rather than another?’ The two questions are clearly different, even though the
answers to them may overlap.
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The notion of ‘negative’ freedom
I am normally said to be free to the degree to which no human being interferes
with my activity. Political liberty in this sense is simply the area within which a
man can act unobstructed by others. If I am prevented by other persons from
doing what I could otherwise do, I am to that degree unfree; and if this area is
contracted by other men beyond a certain minimum, I can be described as
being coerced, or, it may be, enslaved. Coercion is not, however, a term that
covers every form of inability. If I say that I am unable to jump more than ten
feet in the air, or cannot read because I am blind, or cannot understand the
darker pages of Hegel, it would be eccentric to say that I am to that degree
enslaved or coerced. Coercion implies the deliberate interference of other
human beings within the area in which I could otherwise act. You lack political
liberty or freedom only if you are prevented from attaining a goal by human
beings.1 Mere incapacity to attain a goal is not lack of political freedom.2 This
is brought out by the use of such modern expressions as ‘economic freedom’
and its counterpart, ‘economic slavery’. It is argued, very plausibly, that if a
man is too poor to afford something on which there is no legal ban – a loaf of
bread, a journey round the world, recourse to the law courts – he is as little free
to have it as he would be if it were forbidden him by Law. If my poverty were a
kind of disease, which prevented me from buying bread or paying for the
journey round the world, or getting my case heard, as lameness prevents me
from running, this inability would not naturally be described as a lack of
freedom, least of all political freedom. It is only because I believe that my
inability to get a given thing is due to the fact that other human beings have
made arrangements whereby I am, whereas others are not, prevented from
having enough money with which to pay for it, that I think myself a victim of
coercion or slavery. In other words, this use of the term depends on a particular
social and economic theory about the causes of my poverty or weakness. If my
lack of material means is due to my lack of mental or physical capacity, then I
begin to speak of being deprived of freedom (and not simply of poverty) only if
I accept the theory.3 If, in addition, I believe that I am being kept in want by a
specific arrangement which I consider unjust or unfair, I speak of economic
slavery or oppression. ‘The nature of things does not madden us, only ill will
does’, said Rousseau. The criterion of oppression is the part that I believe to be
played by other human beings, directly or indirectly, with or without the
intention of doing so, in frustrating my wishes. By being free in this sense I
mean not being interfered with by others. The wider the area of noninterference the wider my freedom.
This is what the classical English political philosophers meant when they
used this word.4 They disagreed about how wide the area could or should be.
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They supposed that it could not, as things were, be unlimited, because if it
were, it would entail a state in which all men could boundlessly interfere with
all other men; and this kind of ‘natural’ freedom would lead to social chaos in
which men’s minimum needs would not be satisfied; or else the liberties of the
weak would be suppressed by the strong. Because they perceived that human
purposes and activities do not automatically harmonize with one another; and,
because (whatever their official doctrines) they put high value on other goals,
such as justice, or happiness, or culture, or security, or varying degrees of
equality, they were prepared to curtail freedom in the interests of other values
and, indeed, of freedom itself. For, without this, it was impossible to create the
kind of association that they thought desirable. Consequently, it is assumed by
these thinkers that the area of men’s free action must be limited by law. But
equally it is assumed, especially by such libertarians as Locke and Mill in
England, and Constant and Tocqueville in France, that there ought to exist a
certain minimum area of personal freedom which must on no account be
violated; for if it is overstepped, the individual will find himself in an area too
narrow for even that minimum development of his natural faculties which
alone makes it possible to pursue, and even to conceive, the various ends which
men hold good or right or sacred. It follows that a frontier must be drawn
between the area of private life and that of public authority. Where it is to be
drawn is a matter of argument, indeed of haggling. Men are largely
interdependent, and no man’s activity is so completely private as never to
obstruct the lives of others in any way. ‘Freedom for the pike is death for the
minnows’; the liberty of some must depend on the restraint of others.5 Still, a
practical compromise has to be found.
Philosophers with an optimistic view of human nature, and a belief in the
possibility of harmonizing human interest, such as Locke or Adam Smith and,
in some moods, Mill, believed that social harmony and progress were
compatible with reserving a large area for private life over which neither the
state nor any other authority must be allowed to trespass. Hobbes, and those
who agreed with him, especially conservative or reactionary thinkers, argued
that if men were to be prevented from destroying one another, and making
social life a jungle or a wilderness, greater safeguards must be instituted to
keep them in their places, and wished correspondingly to increase the area of
centralized control, and decrease that of the individual. But both sides agreed
that some portion of human existence must remain independent of the sphere
of social control. To invade that preserve, however small, would be despotism.
The most eloquent of all defenders of freedom and privacy, Benjamin Constant,
who had not forgotten the Jacobin dictatorship, declared that at the very least
the liberty of religion, opinion, expression, property, must be guaranteed
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against arbitrary invasion. Jefferson, Burke, Paine, Mill, compiled different
catalogues of individual liberties, but the argument for keeping authority at
bay is always substantially the same. We must preserve a minimum area of
personal freedom if we are not to ‘degrade or deny our nature’. We cannot
remain absolutely free, and must give up some of our liberty to preserve the
rest. But total self-surrender is self-defeating. What then must the minimum
be? That which a man cannot give up without offending against the essence of
his human nature. What is this essence? What are the standards which it
entails? This has been, and perhaps always will be, a matter of infinite debate.
But whatever the principle in terms of which the area of non-interference is to
be drawn, whether it is that of natural law or natural rights, or of utility or the
pronouncements of a categorical imperative, or the sanctity of the social
contract, or any other concept with which men have sought to clarify and
justify their convictions, liberty in this sense means liberty from: absence of
interference beyond the shifting, but always recognizable, frontier. ‘The only
freedom which deserves the name is that of pursuing our own good in our own
way’, said the most celebrated of its champions. If this is so, is compulsion ever
justified? Mill had no doubt that it was. Since justice demands that all
individuals be entitled to a minimum of freedom, all other individuals were of
necessity to be restrained, if need be by force, from depriving anyone of it.
Indeed, the whole function of law was the prevention of just such collisions: the
state was reduced to what Lassalle contemptuously described as the functions
of a night-watchman or traffic policeman.
What made the protection of individual liberty so sacred to Mill? In his
famous essay he declares that unless men are left to live as they wish ‘in the
path which merely concerns themselves’, civilization cannot advance; the
truth will not, for lack of a free market in ideas, come to light; there will be no
scope for spontaneity, originality, genius, for mental energy, for moral courage.
Society will be crushed by the weight of ‘collective mediocrity’. Whatever is
rich and diversified will be crushed by the weight of custom, by men’s constant
tendency to conformity, which breeds only ‘withered capacities’, ‘pinched and
hidebound’, ‘cramped and warped’ human beings. ‘Pagan self-assertion is as
worthy as Christian self-denial.’ ‘All the errors which a man is likely to commit
against advice and warning are far outweighed by the evil of allowing others
to constrain him to what they deem is good.’ The defence of liberty consists in
the ‘negative’ goal of warding off interference. To threaten a man with
persecution unless he submits to a life in which he exercises no choices of his
goals; to block before him every door but one, no matter how noble the
prospect upon which it opens, or how benevolent the motives of those who
arrange this, is to sin against the truth that he is a man, a being with a life of his
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own to live. This is liberty as it has been conceived by liberals in the modern
world from the days of Erasmus (some would say of Occam) to our own. Every
plea for civil liberties and individual rights, every protest against exploitation
and humiliation, against the encroachment of public authority, or the mass
hypnosis of custom or organized propaganda, springs from this individualistic, and much disputed, conception of man.
Three facts about this position may be noted. In the first place Mill confuses
two distinct notions. One is that all coercion is, in so far as it frustrates human
desires, bad as such, although it may have to be applied to prevent other,
greater evils; while non-interference, which is the opposite of coercion, is good
as such, although it is not the only good. This is the ‘negative’ conception of
liberty in its classical form. The other is that men should seek to discover the
truth, or to develop a certain type of character of which Mill approved –
fearless, original, imaginative, independent, non-conforming to the point of
eccentricity, and so on – and that truth can be found, and such character can be
bred, only in conditions of freedom. Both these are liberal views, but they are
not identical, and the connection between them is, at best, empirical. No one
would argue that truth or freedom of self-expression could flourish where
dogma crushes all thought. But the evidence of history tends to show (as,
indeed, was argued by James Stephen in his formidable attack on Mill in his
Liberty, Equality, Fraternity) that integrity, love of truth and fiery individualism grow at least as often in severely disciplined communities among, for
example, the puritan Calvinists of Scotland or New England, or under military
discipline, as in more tolerant or indifferent societies; and if this is so accepted,
Mill’s argument for liberty as a necessary condition for the growth of human
genius falls to the ground. If his two goals proved incompatible, Mill would be
faced with a cruel dilemma, quite apart from the further difficulties created by
the inconsistency of his doctrines with strict utilitarianism, even in his own
humane version of it.6
In the second place, the doctrine is comparatively modern. There seems to
be scarcely any discussion of individual liberty as a conscious political ideal
(as opposed to its actual existence) in the ancient world. Condorcet has already
remarked that the notion of individual rights is absent from the legal
conceptions of the Romans and Greeks; this seems to hold equally of the
Jewish, Chinese, and all other ancient civilizations that have since come to
light.7 The domination of this ideal has been the exception rather than the
rule, even in the recent history of the West. Nor has liberty in this sense often
formed a rallying cry for the great masses of mankind. The desire not to be
impinged upon, to be left to oneself, has been a mark of high civilization both
on the part of individuals and communities. The sense of privacy itself, of the
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area of personal relationships as something sacred in its own right, derives
from a conception of freedom which, for all its religious roots, is scarcely older,
in its developed state, than the Renaissance or the Reformation.8 Yet its
decline would mark the death of a civilization, of an entire moral outlook.
The third characteristic of this notion of liberty is of greater importance. It is
that liberty in this sense is not incompatible with some kinds of autocracy, or at
any rate with the absence of self-government. Liberty in this sense is
principally concerned with the area of control, not with its source. Just as a
democracy may, in fact, deprive the individual citizen of a great many liberties
which he might have in some other form of society, so it is perfectly conceivable
that a liberal-minded despot would allow his subjects a large measure of
personal freedom. The despot who leaves his subjects a wide area of liberty
may be unjust, or encourage the wildest inequalities, care little for order, or
virtue, or knowledge, but provided he does not curb their liberty, or at least
curbs it less than many other regimes, he meets with Mill’s specification.9
Freedom in this sense is not, at any rate logically, connected with democracy or
self-government. Self-government may, on the whole, provide a better
guarantee of the preservation of civil liberties than other regimes, and has
been defended as such by libertarians. But there is no necessary connection
between individual liberty and democratic rule. The answer to the question
‘Who governs me?’ is logically distinct from the question ‘How far does
government interfere with me?’ It is in this difference that the great contrast
between the two concepts of negative and positive liberty, in the end,
consists.10 For the ‘positive’ sense of liberty comes to light if we try to answer
the question, not ‘What am I free to do or be?’, but ‘By whom am I ruled?’ or
‘Who is to say what I am, and what I am not, to be or do?’ The connection
between democracy and individual liberty is a good deal more tenuous than it
seemed to many advocates of both. The desire to be governed by myself, or at
any rate to participate in the process by which my life is to be a controlled, may
be as deep a wish as that of a free area for action, and perhaps historically
older. But it is not a desire for the same thing. So different is it, indeed, as to
have led in the end to the great clash of ideologies that dominates our world.
For it is this – the ‘positive’ conception of liberty: not freedom from, but
freedom to – which the adherents of the ‘negative’ notion represent as being, at
times, no better than a specious disguise for brutal tyranny.
The notion of positive freedom
The ‘positive’sense of the word ‘liberty’ derives from the wish on the part of the
individual to be his own master. I wish my life and decisions to depend on
myself, not on external forces of whatever kind. I wish to be the instrument of
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my own, not of other men’s acts of will. I wish to be a subject, not an object; to be
moved by reasons, by conscious purposes which are my own, not by causes
which affect me, as it were, from outside. I wish to be somebody, not nobody; a
doer – deciding, not being decided for, self-directed and not acted upon by
external nature or by other men as if I were a thing, or an animal, or a slave
incapable of playing a human role, that is, of conceiving goals and policies of
my own and realizing them. This is at least part of what I mean when I say that
I am rational, and that it is my reason that distinguishes me as a human being
from the rest of the world. I wish, above all, to be conscious of myself as a
thinking, willing, active being, bearing responsibility for his choices and able
to explain them by reference to his own ideas and purposes. I feel free to the
degree that I believe this to be true, and enslaved to the degree that I am made
to realize that it is not.
The freedom which consists in being one’s own master, and the freedom
which consists in not being prevented from choosing as I do by other men, may,
on the face of it, seem concepts at no great logical distance from each other – no
more than negative and positive ways of saying the same thing. Yet the
‘positive’ and ‘negative’ notions of freedom historically developed in divergent
directions not always by logically reputable steps, until, in the end, they came
into direct conflict with each other.
One way of making this clear is in terms of the independent momentum
which the, initially perhaps quite harmless, metaphor of self-mastery
acquired. ‘I am my own master’; ‘I am slave to no man’; but may I not (as,
for instance, T. H. Green is always saying) be a slave to nature? Or to my own
‘unbridled’ passions? Are these not so many species of the identical genus
‘slave’ – some political or legal, others moral or spiritual? Have not men had the
experience of liberating themselves from spiritual slavery, or slavery to nature,
and do they not in the course of it become aware, on the one hand, of a self
which dominates, and, on the other, of something in them which is brought to
heel? This dominant self is then variously identified with reason, with my
‘higher nature’, with the self which calculates and aims at what will satisfy it in
the long run, with my ‘real’, or ‘ideal’, or ‘autonomous’ self, or with my self ‘at
its best’; which is then contrasted with irrational impulse, uncontrolled desires,
my ‘lower’ nature, the pursuit of immediate pleasures, my ‘empirical’ or
‘heteronomous’ self, swept by every gust of desire and passion, needing to be
rigidly disciplined if it is ever to rise to the full height of its ‘real’ nature.
Presently the two selves may be represented as divided by an even larger gap:
the real self may be conceived as something wider than the individual (as the
term is normally understood), as a social ‘whole’ of which the individual is an
element or aspect: a tribe, a race, a church, a state, the great society of the living
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and the dead and the yet unborn. This entity is then identified as being the
‘true’ self which, by imposing its collective, or ‘organic’, single will upon its
recalcitrant ‘members’, achieves its own, and, therefore, their, ‘higher’ freedom.
The perils of using organic metaphors to justify the coercion of some men by
others in order to raise them to a ‘higher’ level of freedom have often been
pointed out. But what gives such plausibility as it has to this kind of language
is that we recognize that it is possible, and at times justifiable, to coerce men in
the name of some goal (let us say, justice or public health) which they would, if
they were more enlightened, themselves pursue, but do not, because they are
blind or ignorant or corrupt. This renders it easy for me to conceive of myself
as coercing others for their own sake, in their, not my, interest. I am then
claiming that I know what they truly need better than they know it themselves.
What, at most, this entails is that they would not resist me if they were rational,
and as wise as I, and understood their interests as I do. But I may go on to claim
a good deal more than this. I may declare that they are actually aiming at what
in their benighted state they consciously resist, because there exists within
them an occult entity – their latent rational will, or their ‘true’ purpose – and
that this entity, although it is belied by all that they overtly feel and do and say,
is their ‘real’ self, of which the poor empirical self in space and time may know
nothing or little; and that this inner spirit is the only self that deserves to have
its wishes taken into account.11 Once I take this view, I am in a position to
ignore the actual wishes of men or societies, to bully, oppress, torture them in
the name, and on behalf, of their ‘real’ selves, in the secure knowledge that
whatever is the true goal of man (happiness, fulfilment of duty, wisdom, a just
society, self-fulfilment) must be identical with his freedom – the free choice of
his ‘true’, albeit submerged and inarticulate, self.
This paradox has been often exposed. It is one thing to say that I know what
is good for X, while he himself does not and even to ignore his wishes for its –
and his – sake; and a very different one to say that he has eo ipso chosen it, not
indeed consciously, not as he seems in everyday life, but in his role as a rational
self which his empirical self may not know – the ‘real’ self which discerns the
good, and cannot help choosing it once it is revealed. This monstrous
impersonation, which consists in equating what X would choose if he were
something he is not, or at least not yet, with what X actually seeks and chooses,
is at the heart of all political theories of self-realization. It is one thing to say
that I may be coerced for my own good which I am too blind to see: this may, on
occasion, be for my benefit; indeed it may enlarge the scope of my liberty; it is
another to say that if it is my good, then I am not being coerced, for I have willed
it, whether I know this or not, and am free – or ‘truly’ free – even while my poor
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earthly body and foolish mind bitterly reject it, and struggle against those who
seek however benevolently to impose it, with the greatest desperation.
This magical transformation, or sleight of hand (for which William James so
justly mocked the Hegelians), can no doubt be perpetrated just as easily with
the ‘negative’ concept of freedom, where the self that should not be interfered
with is no longer the individual with his actual wishes and needs as they are
normally conceived, but the ‘real’ man within, identified with the pursuit of
some ideal purpose not dreamed of by his empirical self. And, as in the case of
the ‘positively’ free self, this entity may be inflated into some super-personal
entity – a state, a class, a nation, or the march of history itself, regarded as a
more ‘real’ subject of attributes than the empirical self. But the ‘positive’
conception of freedom as self-mastery, with its suggestion of a man divided
against himself, has, in fact, and as a matter of the history of doctrines and of
practice, lent itself more easily to this splitting of personality into two: the
transcendent, dominant controller, and the empirical bundle of desires and
passions to be disciplined and brought to heel. This demonstrates (if
demonstration of so obvious a truth is needed) that the conception of freedom
directly derives from the view that is taken of what constitutes a self, a person,
a man. Enough manipulation with the definition of man, and freedom can be
made to mean whatever the manipulator wishes. Recent history has made it
only too clear that the issue is not merely academic.
Notes
*
This version of the essay is from A. Quinton (ed.) Political Philosophy, Oxford University
Press, Oxford Readings in Philosophy, 1967, pp.141–52. The quotations from ‘Two Concepts
of Liberty’ in the main text sometimes have a slightly different wording from this version of
the essay.
1
I do not, of course, mean to imply the truth of the converse.
2
Helvétius made this point very clearly: ‘The free man is the man who is not in irons, nor
imprisoned in a gaol, nor terrorized like a slave by the fear of punishment ... it is not lack of
freedom not to fly like an eagle or swim like a whale.’
3
The Marxist conceptions of social laws is, of course, the best-known version of this theory,
but it forms a large element in some Christian and utilitarian, and all socialist, doctrines.
4
‘A free man’, said Hobbes, ‘is he that ... is not hindered to do what he hath the will to do.’
Law is always a ‘fetter’, even if it protects you from being bound in chains that are heavier
than those of the law, say, arbitrary despotism or chaos. Bentham says much the same.
5
‘Freedom for an Oxford don’, others have been known to add, ‘is a very different thing from
freedom for an Egyptian peasant.’
This proposition derives its force from something that is both true and important, but the
phrase itself remains a piece of political claptrap. It is true that to offer political rights, or
safeguards, against intervention by the state, to men who are half-naked, illiterate, underfed,
and diseased is to mock their condition; they need medical help or education before they can
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Positive v. Negative Liberty -- Does it Matter?
There is considerable debate about the distinction between negative and positive liberty. It matters because each defines a
different view of what is permissible for the state to do, and in establishing what the state exists to do in the name of governing.
Negative Liberty means "freedom from” (absence of constraints or the interference of government)
• John Locke's theory of Natural Rights is in the tradition of Negative Liberty.
It is defined as limited government - restraint of government obstacles placed on individual liberty and a person's
property.
Government exists to protect the people's liberty by not interfering in the individual's right to pursue what they value.
Negative Liberty strongly limits government restraint of the individual.
• This does not mean doing as one likes, but doing what one ought to do.
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Positive Liberty means "capacity to” (freedom and ability to pursue one's goals with government)
President Franklin Roosevelt added the concept of Positive Liberty in 1941 when he said the U.S. would fight for four
freedoms: Freedom of Speech, Freedom of Worship, Freedom from Want, and Freedom from Fear.
• Freedom of Speech and Freedom of Worship are traditional American Negative Liberties that no one can take away from
individuals.
• Freedom from Want was a new twist-a Positive Liberty-Roosevelt was trying to pass his New Deal to meet the Great
Depression.
• Justifies government action to give people what they lack that would make them free.
• Government provides the necessities of life.
Positive Liberty means that in order to give some people what they want to have, government must take those resources from
others. This is a violation of the citizen's negative liberty.
Who determines what people need to be given—who decides the necessities of life? Traditionally, Americans define social
welfare as help for those who through no fault of their own deserve assistance.
How do you view liberty in these examples?
• The government wants you to stop smoking so they pass multiple laws and impose multiple taxes on cigarettes, banning
smokers from public areas, and in some states, banning smoking in private homes to force people not to smoke.
• The Mayor of New York City imposed a ban on 20 ounce "super-sized" drinks, and New York restaurants are not permitted
to keep salt on tables.
• The Internal Revenue Service (IRS) targeted over 1000 political interest groups applying for tax exempt status, if their
name or political materials included words such as “patriot,” Tea Party," or "liberty." These group applications were put on
hold while they were told to answer pages and pages of "extra" questions in order for their applications to be processed
by the IRS.
• U.S. District Court judge imposed a $500.00 fine on Massachusetts fisherman Robert J. Eldridge for untangling a giant
whale from his nets to free it. According to the court, Eldridge was supposed to call state authorities and wait for them.
Philadelphia requires all bloggers to purchase a $300 business privilege license. The city fined a woman who earned only
$11.00 from her blog over the past two years.
• Texas requires every new computer repair technician to be a licensed private investigator. That means a person must
have a degree in criminal justice or complete a three year apprenticeship with a licensed private investigator. A computer
repair technician found violating the law, or a regular citizen that has a computer repaired by someone not in compliance
with the law, will be fined $4,000 and/or jailed for a year.
U.S. Food and Drug Administration estimates the food service industry will spend an additional 14 million hours per year
to comply with federal regulations mandating all vending machines and restaurants label all products they sell with a
calorie count in a location visible to the consumer.
In a growing number of school districts, students as young as kindergartners who even use the word “gun" are suspended
or even expelled from school.
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