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Assignment 3: Course Project—Final Draft of Essay
In this assignment, you will complete final revisions and submit your five-paragraph essay on your chosen topic presenting an informed, cohesive opinion.
As you reach the final stages of revision, examine your writing style. Did you use complete sentences and avoid run-ons and comma splices? Do you reuse words too often? Do you choose passive voice when active voice would make the paper more engaging? This is a good time to read your paper aloud to a friend or into a recorder to catch any inconsistencies in your style.
After developing your thesis, writing body paragraphs, writing a conclusion, revising for effectiveness, and editing for grammar and style, the time has come to submit your final paper! Be sure that your essay includes the following:
- A strong thesis statement
- A well-written introduction
- The main body with at least three separate body paragraphs
- A complete, well-written conclusion
Review your essay for the following:
- Specific details
- Well-formed topic sentences
- Well-selected stories, descriptive details, or comparisons
- Logical arrangement of details and ideas with appropriate transitions
- No repetition or wordiness
- Appropriate revisions based on first draft feedback
- Proper use of grammar, punctuation, and spelling
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Introduction
Elon Musk; a business magnate and investor, once said, “If you are trying to create a
company, it is like baking a cake. You have to have all the ingredients in the right proportion.”
Starting a company is similar to starting a business. Hence, as Musk said and similar to that
notion; the success of business highly depends on the businessperson and the qualities that this
person possesses. A person must have the appropriate attributes for the company that they intend
to start and run, for it to be successful. As such, therefore, there are some qualities that are
common to entrepreneurs regardless of the field that the person has chosen to invest in. An ideal
businessperson must be willing to take risks, have excellent communication skills, be innovative,
be reliable, possess leadership skills; such as have critical and problem-solving skills, and be
ready to take the initiative, as these qualities are important aspects that an individual ought to
have in the event that they are considering owning and running a business.
Good Business Skills
Most people who have opted to start up businesses have a right amount of capital put into
it. However, there are numerous stories of well-funded companies that have been closed shortly
after their establishment. It is notable, that in a bid to succeed, the entrepreneur needs to have the
ability to hold and conduct viable businesses. As aforementioned, the ideal b...