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English
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University of Central Florida
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Essay #1
I think the essay is organized in an effective ay and the voice and creating the curiosity
element that the author uses is clearly heard. One can understand the reason why you would
ask for forgiveness on the action you did and feel sorry for you and the person you are
apologizing to base on the friendship bond you guys have. However, I think the one place
you can improve the quality of the response is by showing the element of conflicts in the
essay. You only provide the incident where you already committed a crime but did not
explain the conflict causing the action comprehensively.
Essay #2
The descriptive elements in the discussion are very effective as one can vividly create the
image f the setting you are talking about, like at the beginning where you describe the tree, its
features, and location. Additionally, the organization of the essay is effective as it moves
from general to a specific point making it easy to understand. However, I think the element of
conflict is missing throughout the essay. Also, there is a need to include an apology within
the story and to who you are apologizing.

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