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Week 8 Assignment Incorporating Feedback
What feedback did you receive from your instructor?
It was mentioned that by using only one source in my essay I would affect the overall outcome,
other than that it was stated that the rest appeared to be coming along as to create a good essay.
Also it was mentioned that I did not use any citations in my essay.
From the peer reviewer?
The peer review said that the introduction was very catching and made my classmate want to
read on, however, it was also mentioned that some of my descriptions for the gun control laws
were a little vague. One other part that brought up some controversy was the part where I
described the different types of rifles. My classmate says that it really does not need to be in the
essay and takes away from the main point, with this being said I would have to disagree.
From the Center for Writing Excellence?
The Center for Writing Excellence made notations on several parts of my essay. A couple of
times were due to writing in a second person and not a third; others were due to run on sentences.
There was one incident of a noun-pronoun agreement problem and some incorrect
capitalizations, with one error made by spelling out a number greater than ten and also a word
slash word error. There was also one problem with using colloquial language in this essay. All in
all, this center is an eye opener to whoever uses it; I had no idea that there were as many errors in
my essay as what the center reported. Also the feedback
Explain how you will incorporate the feedback into your paper.
All the feedback I received will be put to good use, I will try to revise my whole essay to
incorporate all the information my feedback was saying I am missing. The feedback I received
from the Center for Writing Excellence will be corrected to better produce a proper academic
paper with the least amount of errors as possible. Also I will have all my citations in order when
the final paper is turned in.
How will this feedback improve your expository essay?
This feedback will help me correct the errors I have made and also add more information to
better describe the main topic. Some of the feedback I will not incorporated and I just hope it
does not affect the outcome of the essay, instead of taking information out of my essay I will find
a way to better incorporated it into my introduction and explain why it is there.
What feedback did you choose not to include?
From what I can tell I did not leave out any of the feedback provided for my essay, I always
welcome any help and this was a great help.

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