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• Majeed, T., Forder, P., Mishra, G. et al. (2015) ‘Women, work, and illness: a longitudinal

analysis of workforce participation patterns for women beyond middle age’, Journal of

Women’s Health, Jun 2015; 24(6): 455-465.

• Martinez-Mesa, J., Gonzales-Chica, D. A., Duquia, R. P. et al. (2016) ‘Sampling: how to

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‘Beyond the HIPAA Privacy Rule: Enhancing Privacy, Improving Health Through Research’,

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