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3 PRP Feedback for 1st submission 2020

3 PRP Feedback for 1st submission 2020

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Faculty of Health & Applied Sciences

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Student Number: 17022535

Module Code and Title: UZYS1W-15-1 Preparation for Radiotherapy Practice

Submission date: 03/03/2020

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Marker’s Comments:

Section A – Barriers to Communication:

At the moment this section needs to be more clearly laid out and to have clearly defined barriers that

you are going to explore. There is a lack of supporting evidence and your work is descriptive often

missing the point. This is a shame as you are beginning to develop some good ideas but it needs

further development and a clearer structure.

Section B – Communication and Safety:

It is not clear where this section starts as there is no heading and this would have been good for the

reader to have been able to distinguish. This section is mainly descriptive and there was scope to

have elaborated on some of the aspects in greater detail to demonstrate your understanding. Try and

think about one example and then explore this in detail with supporting evidence as this will help you

to focus your discussions in a more meaningful way and enable you to evaluate the evidence.

Section C – Decision Making Scenario:

This shows some reflection and evaluation in parts but needs to be more consistent throughout.

Ensure the words written are your own and not taken directly from sources of evidence. On the whole

this section is better written that parts A and B and you are meeting the relevant learning outcomes

although it is mainly descriptive.

Additional Comments:

At the moment your writing needs to develop academically and you need to be clear on the

assignment brief so that you can focus your discussions and evidence on the relevant aspects.

Ensure you have a plan of how you want your assignment to look and then think about how you will

gather evidence to address the areas you want to discuss. This will help you to understand what

aspects to explore and evaluate and will enable you to have a clearer idea of what to include.

Second marker comments:

Second marker agrees with first marker’s comments and score.

Development points

(what might need to be done in order to improve the grade)

You are strongly advised to access study skills support, in particular how to search for literature, write

assignments and referencing.

Study Skills: A checked box indicates aspects that need development and where you could benefit

from study skills guidance. Please use this link to the myskills resource website:

http://www.uwe.ac.uk/library/resources/hub/

Interpretation of the question Limited evidence of appropriate reading

Assignment structure Inaccurate referencing

Communication and written style Word count not included

Errors in punctuation, spelling and grammar

You are strongly advised to make an appointment with the module leader:

You are strongly advised to make an appointment with the first marker:

35%

First Marker: Mandy Tuckey

Second Marker: Andrea Maggs

Students are reminded that the mark shown on this sheet is PROVISIONAL until ratified by the Field Board.

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Assessment Feedback Faculty of Health & Applied Sciences Student Number: 17022535 Module Code and Title: UZYS1W-15-1 Preparation for Radiotherapy Practice Submission date: 03/03/2020 Marker’s Comments: Section A – Barriers to Communication: At the moment this section needs to be more clearly laid out and to have clearly defined barriers that you are going to explore. There is a lack of supporting evidence and your work is descriptive often missing the point. This is a shame as you are beginning to develop some good ideas but it needs further development and a clearer structure. Section B – Communication and Safety: It is not clear where this section starts as there is no heading and this would have been good for the reader to have been able to distinguish. This section is mainly descriptive and there was scope to have elaborated on some of the aspects in greater detail to demonst ...
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