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Capitalization

mistakes

Generally, common nouns

should not be capitalized. At

the same time, proper nouns

(names of people,

companies, cities, etc.)

require capitalization.

● on the twin towers and the pentagon;

● in the United states / of the united states;

● The middle east has;

● has always been the Jurisdictional area of

operation;

● was the main Orchestrator;

● until may 2011;

● The death of bin laden;

● the same Weapons of Mass Destruction;

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Comma splices

and fused

sentences

Two main clauses must be

separated by a semicolon or

a comma and conjunction.

● The Homeland Security next movement

was in Afghanistan and it was referred to as

enduring freedom, this forced Bin Laden

to…

● Perceptibly, the capturing of Bin Laden

proved to the event that brought Homeland

Security to light however, the organisation

had been dealing with...

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Faulty parallelism

Remember that you should

have a balance within one or

more sentences of similar

phrases or clauses that have

the same grammatical

structure. The application of

parallelism affects readability

and may make texts easier

to process.

● I got into marriages and took divorce;

● in protecting the lives of Americans,

increasing [...], bringing [...], and make it

possible;

● of many businesses, economies,

employment opportunities, and health

status;

● is ensuring their safety and protect them;

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Faulty predication

The verb must fit in the

context according to the

subject it is used with.

● relationship patterns that display

advancement courtesy;

● One of the reasons why [...] is due to its

complacency;

● this forced Bin Laden to hiding [hide] and

stated the force on him was;

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Faulty word forms

Ensure the form of the word

you use fits in the sentence

grammatically.

● of these therapies and educations

programs;

● While almost every person and politicians

might;

● COVID-19 is not going to be the last of a

pandemic;

● of the United State triggered;

● this forced Bin Laden to hiding;

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● various counterterrorist measures;

Incorrect use of

modifiers

A modifier describes,

clarifies, or gives more detail

about a concept. Make sure

to position the modifier in

close proximity to the

word/phrase it modifies and

connect them grammatically

and semantically.

● Looking at developmental phases [...], ego

plays a crucial role;

● Guided by the federal principal law, the

paper shows;

● As the lead coffee-oriented business

organization in various world regions, there

are significant chances;

● As a child welfare worker, it is important to

consider;

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Incorrect word

order

Sentences commonly follow

Subject-Verb-Object pattern.

● that COVID-19 is neither the first pandemic

[...], nor will it be the last.

● seeing the number of increasing cases;

● bringing back the economy to life;

● there were other witnessed and rising

numbers of preventable illnesses;

● Guided by the federal principal law;

● Every government has in place various

laws and regulations;

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Misspellings

Proofread your papers for

any misspellings.

● from harch realities;

● which effected great things;

● COIVID-19/COIVD-19;

● a srategy;

● leader and financer;

● The United State Federal government;

● Bin Laden was stripped off is citizenship;

● state interventio;

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Misused articles

Articles provide information

about the noun they precede.

Be attentive to the use of

articles.

● The reasons behind the declining COVID-

19 vaccination;

● as (the) federal government assists;

● resulted to [in] (the) killing of almost 3000

people;

● the Homeland Security was formed as (a)

collaborative national initiative;

● that brought the two into (the) light;

● reflecting on a guerrilla and terrorist

settings;

● for the Al-Qaeda and;

● To evaluate [...], (the) analysis will be

based;

● using the military intimidation tactics;

● an investigation of (the) FBI through;

● as (an) aspect tied to ethical standards;

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Grammar Issue Comment Capitalization mistakes Generally, common nouns should not be capitalized. At the same time, proper nouns (names of people, companies, cities, etc.) require capitalization. ● ● ● ● Two main clauses must be separated by a semicolon or a comma and conjunction. ● Comma splices and fused sentences Example ● ● ● ● ● Faulty parallelism Remember that you should have a balance within one or more sentences of similar phrases or clauses that have the same grammatical structure. The application of parallelism affects readability and may make texts easier to process. ● ● Faulty predication The verb must fit in the context according to the subject it is used with. ● ● ● ● ● Faulty word forms Ensure the form of the word you use fits in the sentence grammatically. ● ● ● ● ● Link on the twin towers and the pentagon; Learn in the United states / of the united states; More The middle east has; has always been the Jurisdictional area of operation; was the main Orchestrator; until may 2011; The death of bin laden; the same Weapons of Mass Destruction; The Homeland Security next movement Learn was in Afghanistan and it was referred to as More enduring freedom, this forced Bin Laden to… Perceptibly, the capturing of Bin Laden proved to the event that brought Homeland Security to light however, the organisation had been dealing with... I got into marriages and took divorce; in protecting the lives of Americans ...
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