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Running head: REVISION PLANNING QUESTIONS 1
Revision Planning Questions
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REVISION PLANNING QUESTIONS 2
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1. Identify an issue in the CFF that applies to your documents. How will you revise your
documents to address this issue?
One of the issues that apply to my documents is concision which includes the
writing and style. I have used unnecessary words in some sentences making the sentences
lengthy. I will revise the documents by removing some words and phrases toshorten the
sentences and make them more precise. I will ensure that the adjustments do not interfere
with the tone of the message intended in each email.
2. Is the purpose of each document sufficiently clear? Does the document continue to achieve
its stated purpose throughout the entire text?
The purpose of the documents is clear in each email. The email to Sheila, our client,
has clearly stated the purpose of apologizing for the mistake and assuring the client of
improved services to avoid a similar situation. Similarly, the email to MaintainU clearly
states the frustrations and effects of the negligence of the company. Further, it outlines the
need for improved services in safeguarding the relationship between the two companies.
The email to the president provides the necessary information to inform him of the issues
at hand and a request for his intervention in dealing with the situation.
3. Is the content and tone of each document tailored to the specific needs of the target
audience?
Yes. The email to the client tone emphasizes the apology by acknowledging the
mistake by using polite words and an assuring tone. Similarly, the tone of the emails to the
president and MaintainU are appropriate by avoiding any personal attacks and demands.

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Running head: REVISION PLANNING QUESTIONS Revision Planning Questions Institution affiliation Date 1 REVISION PLANNING QUESTIONS 2 Questions 1. Identify an issue in the CFF that applies to your documents. How will you revise your documents to address this issue? One of the issues that apply to my documents is concision which includes the writing and style. I have used unnecessary words in some sentences making the sentences lengthy. I will revise the documents by removing some words and phrases toshorten the sentences and make them more precise. I will ensure that the adjustments do not interfere with the tone of the message intended in each email. 2. Is the purpose of each document sufficiently clear? Does the document continue to achieve its stated purpose throughout the entire text? The purpose of the documents is clear in each email. The email to Sheila, our client, has clearly stated the purpose of apologizing for the mistake and assuring the client of improved services to avoid a similar situation. Similarly, the email to MaintainU clearly states the frustrations and effects of the negligence of the company. Further, it outlines the need for improved services in safegua ...
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