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Hello Campos
Your clear discussion about the isms or rather the activities that were brought about by
the second civilization is interesting and captivating. Your clear definition to each of the terms is
captivating and detailed thus giving a reader insight and understanding of what you are talking
about. Clearly distinguishing the terms and discussing them in depth is an indication of a well-
done research. Not only is this discussion well researched but also the way you’ve brought out
your points and clearly defined them is a good indicator that you understood what you reader.
Distinguishing or differentiating the impact or the Confucianism and Daoism, is of great help to
a reader.
You have simplified the meaning of the two making it easy to understand and to
distinguish. In fact, many times the people have thought of the two as the same thing and
think the only difference is the terminologies used. Also, addressing how the isms were used
in communities is remarkable. Your discussion portrays a work well researched, well read and
by analyzing and giving further explanations to what you have researched and read. And
clearly bringing out the concepts in your discussion is a clear indication of your understanding
of what you are discussing.

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Hello Campos Your clear discussion about the isms or rather the activities that were brought about by the second civilization is interesting and captivating. Your clear definition to each of the terms is captivating and detailed thus giving a reader insight and understanding of what you are talking about. Clearly distinguishing the terms and discussing them in depth is an indication of a welldone research. Not only is this discussion well researched but also the way you’ve brought out your points and clearly defined them is a good indicator that you understood what you reader. Distinguishing or differentiating the impact or the Confucianism and Daoism, is of great help to a reader. You have simplified the meaning of the two making it easy to understand and to distinguish. In fact, many times the people have thought of the two as the same thing and think the only difference is the terminologies used. Also, addressing how the isms were used in communities is remarkable. Your discussion portrays a work well researched, well read and by analyzing and giving further explanations to what you have researched and read. And clearly bringing out the concepts in your discussion is a clear indication of your understanding of what you are discussing. Name: Description: ...
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