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Fitness centers are the way of the new age! I strongly believe that River View Plaza
needs a fitness center for employees to work out. Healthy fit people produce better
quality work, are much happier at work, and miss less days then people who are not fit.
Having this center will have people wanting to come and work for the businesses at this
plaza. River View Plaza should also offer this for public use, by having a membership at a
competitive price. This fitness center will pay for itself, and generate profit for the
building. This will benefit all the businesses and ones to come in the future. Employees
will be more productive and more motivated at work, causing much better profit to
business owners.
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After submitting my paper to Write Point I noticed it says I have a run on sentence. This is how the
sentence is written. “This fitness center will pay for itself, and generate profit for the building.”
Truthfully I still do not understand why, maybe I need to remove the comma. There is also feedback
explaining that “in the future” is redundant. Maybe this is not excepted in academic writing. This
feedback is useful to see my mistakes and now I can make sure they get corrected. With the Plagiarism
Checker there is 0% similarity but this tool could be useful if I happen to write something I read word-
for-word not meaning to.
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Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most
commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds
comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please
evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for
your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail.
You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint
capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint.
Fitness centers are the way of the new age!
I strongly believe that River View Plaza needs a fitness center for employees to work out.
Healthy fit people produce better quality work, are much happier at work, and miss less days
then people who are not fit. Having this center will have people wanting to come and work for
the businesses at this plaza. River View Plaza should also offer this for public use, by having a
membership at a competitive price. This fitness center will pay for itself [This is a run-on
sentence because there is not a comma before the conjunction. Run-on sentences occur
when conjunctions (and/or) and punctuation marks (commas and semicolons) are not
used properly. ] , and generate profit for the building. This will benefit all the businesses and
ones to come in the future. [usage -- "in the future." is redundant] Employees will be more
productive and more motivated at work, causing much better profit to business owners.
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There are many tools and resources available for students at the Center for Writing Excellence. Besides
the Write Point and Plagiarism Checker, there is the tutorials and guide section which gives students the
advantage to better their grammar and writing skills. There are also links in this section that help with
learning how to write, formatting essays properly, samples of other students work, a citation generator,
and a thesis generator. The CWE also offers a Tutor Review where you can submit a paper for review by
a real person to get a better turn around on mistakes that Write Point may not pick up on. The only
problem with this is it could take 4 days or more to get papers back, so it would have to be submitted
early to make sure you get it back in time to turn in your assignment. There is also writing Manuals,
which explains how to format papers properly and there is a Knowledge slash FAQS link where you can
search for articles through a data base. I found, out of all these tools that the Write Point and Plagiarism
checker in the CWE is the most useful, because I consistently use these tools to help me mind any
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This assignment is 4 separate pages and should be turned in as 4 separate attachments for com 140 Similarity: 0% exclude quoted exclude bibliography download refresh print quickview (classic) report mode: Fitness centers are the way of the new age! I strongly believe that River View Plaza needs a fitness center for employees to work out. Healthy fit people produce better quality work, are much happier at work, and miss less days then people who are not fit. Having this center will have people wanting to come and work for the businesses at this plaza. River View Plaza should also offer this for public use, by having a membership at a competitive price. This fitness center will pay for itself, and generate profit for the building. This will benefit all the businesses and ones to come in the future. Employees will be more productive and more motivated at work, causing much better profit to business owners. This assignment is 4 separate pages and should be turned in as 4 separate attachments for com 140 After submitting my paper to Write Point I noticed it says I have a run on sentence. This is how the sentence is written. “This fitness center will pay for itself, and generate profit for the building.” Truthfully I still do not understand why, maybe I need to remove the comma. There is also feedback explaining that “in the future” is redundant. Maybe this is not excepted in academic writing. This feedback is useful to see my mistakes and now I can make sure they get corrected. With the Plagiarism Checker there is 0% similarity but this tool could be useful if I happen to write something I read wordfor-word not meaning to. This assignment is 4 separate pages and should be turned in as 4 separate attachments for com 140 Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. Fitness centers are the way of the new age! I strongly believe that River View Plaza needs a fitness center for employees to work out. Healthy fit people produce better quality work, are much happier at work, and miss less days then people who are not fit. Having this center will have people wanting to come and work for the businesses at this plaza. River View Plaza should also offer this for public use, by having a membership at a competitive price. This fitness center will pay for itself [This is a run-on sentence because there is not a comma before the conjunction. Run-on sentences occur when conjunctions (and/or) and punctuation marks (commas and semicolons) are not used properly. ] , and generate profit for the building. This will benefit all the businesses and ones to come in the future. [usage -- "in the future." is redundant] Employees will be more productive and more motivated at work, causing much better profit to business owners. This assignment is 4 separate pages and should be turned in as 4 separate attachments for com 140 There are many tools and resources available for students at the Center for Writing Excellence. Besides the Write Point and Plagiarism Checker, there is the tutorials and guide section which gives students the advantage to better their grammar and writing skills. There are also links in this section that help with learning how to write, formatting essays properly, samples of other students work, a citation generator, and a thesis generator. The CWE also offers a Tutor Review where you can submit a paper for review by a real person to get a better turn around on mistakes that Write Point may not pick up on. The only problem with this is it could take 4 days or more to get papers back, so it would have to be submitted early to make sure you get it back in time to turn in your assignment. There is also writing Manuals, which explains how to format papers properly and there is a Knowledge slash FAQS link where you can search for articles through a data base. I found, out of all these tools that the Write Point and Plagiarism checker in the CWE is the most useful, because I consistently use these tools to help me mind any mistakes I might have overlooked Name: Description: ...
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