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timer Asked: Nov 24th, 2014

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hello need help i have got remarks on the previous work......

 you just have to revise the week 7 work which is lesson plan

this is the lesson plan
English Language Learning.docx

I have to get this fixed... my professor  said:

After reviewing your Week 6 assignment submission, I believe you have really missed the mark on this one which affects the outcome of Week 7 assignment. Your submission had two parts 1) Lesson Plan 2) Explanation of lesson plan? For the lesson plan, there is a very limited description and more importantly, there is very GENERIC, GENERALIZED information placed in the lesson plan template I believe you were describing what each section is instead of CREATING a LESSON PLAN with SPECIFIC DETAILS such as having a topic of Ocean Life, then each component (i.e. Standards, Objectives, Materials, etc.) contains descriptions for the Ocean Life lesson and how it would unfold in the classroom. Additionally, I am not sure why the Part 2 section that is essay-like is included because a lesson plan is all that is necessary. Think of it this way: This assignment is basically designed for you to create a normal lesson plan that any teacher should be able to pick up and use in their classroom--with the added bonus of how to address the needs of ELL students. Knowing this, can you see where this submission needs major work? Please make these adjustments before submitting the Week 7 SIOP Lesson Plan.

and these are the rubrics og the work

A6-7 Template-Create SIOP Lsn Pt1 and Pt2. This is an optional format for you to use. Always check the rubric to ensure all aspects of the assignment that will be evaluated are addressed.

A7 Template-ELL Placement Assessments. This is an optional format for you to use. Always check the rubric to ensure all aspects of the assignment that will be evaluevaluated are addressed

please complete it i really need it done

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