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I have to fix 15 grammatical errors in this paragraph_ three of them relating to sentence errors (fragments, fused sentences, or comma splices), five of them relating to subject-verb agreement , and five of them relating to pronoun reference or case. There may be more than mistake per sentence.

I am one of the very few people whom has ever gone searching for a snow leopard. I were on a famous expedition. That went into the Himalayas to see they in the winter of 1979. Climbing up those snowy mountains in winter are not fun! Luckily, we had people with them to help us and carry most of the baggage. It’s hard to describe the wonders of those mountains: huge mountain sheep, the peaks gleaming from a distance on mornings when the winds suddenly tears the snow away, the sense of shadows falling around you through clearer snow than you has ever seen in your life. But of course, most people will want to know the truth: Did you ever see a snow leopard. On that expedition of you? I have to admit that we did not. We found snow leopard tracks in, of course, the snow we saw their shadows from the corner of our eye. We dreamed of the white fur and we dreamed of the gleaming eyes. But we finally had to turn around and go back down the mountains, us ran out of food. Each of us still dream of seeing one.

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