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         Journal 1

  First of all, i think the government of Kenya has accused fees to prevent millions of people as well youth, adult take away the power of the learner. Also is wrong that people have wanted to divert Kimani Maruge studies to have had 84 years, when it was never his fault he could never study but of the government of his region. A child or an adult rich or poor, you are not prohibit the gift of knowing whatever their economic orientation or social political. Second,  the policy of the World Bank and the International Monetary Fund, had to abide otherwise in the decades of 1970 and 1980. because it is unfair that a poor region can afford, what can a rich region could. It is unfair that an region like that you put a law in which in low income children them put a cup to pay well to study.

 In my opinion, there should be an school for adults. Is not appropriated that adults go to same same school kids does. It should be some respect for them. The capacity of learning is not the same as a kid. They have to go to a school where they feel comfortable and can get the attention they deserve and it takes enormous courage for a man of 84 years to start school and learn all the basics.

In addition, that poor people have to pay for the education. Its terrible that kids have to pay get the primary education.

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