help me not long 6th grade work

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Discussion:Planning Feedback

Now, you will participate in a discussion to both give and receive some peer feedback on the personal narrative work you have completed so far.Take a look at part of a sample student response.

I can tell the purpose of your narrative is to entertain, based on the funny tone you use.Good job!I think your plan would be stronger if you added more to the body of the story and spent less time on the beginning.Grab the reader's attention and then move right into the important stuff. You added some nice ideas for details and dialogue!


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