Thesis statements question

timer Asked: Jul 5th, 2015

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I have question about thesis statements, how to decide whether it seem adequate or inadequate. If it seems like a poor thesis statement for a short paper, how to explain why and re-write it to make it better.


  1. I think Gran Torino is a really great movie that everyone should see.

  2. Which brand of computers is better: Dell or Gateway?

  3. Some people think that the state lottery is a bad way to raise money for parks.

  4. My essay will tell you how to choose the best possible insurance for your car.

  5. During the fall term, final exams should be given before Winter break, not after the holidays as they are now.

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