help me to correct this text

timer Asked: Sep 13th, 2015

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I need to pass a text to passive voice, I already did it and I handed to the teacher, but he returned to me saying that i have to correct some mistakes, please help me.

Because a sorcerer's apprentice was Mickey, the household chores were made by him. Two buckets of water were being carried by the apprentice;while a spell was being casted ,thanks to the sorcere’s hat. Suddenly, the hat had been left by the sorcerer. This advantaged was taken by the Apprentice who was closed to it; then, the hat was being taken by him, and As a result, a spell was begun on the broom;  Inmediately, The house was being started to be cleaned by the broom. Thanks to  the magic that was being created by the hat. Since the household chores were being cleaned, a nap was being taken by the apprentice. Water, stars, and fireworks were being dreamed by the apprentice; However, something had woken him up. The rooom was being filled with water. Then, the broom was being searched by the apprentice, but unfortunately, it was too late; no attention was being payed by the broom to the apprentice, and everything began to gotten worse; Then, a decision had being made. An axe had being taken. In order, the broom could be destroyed, but the pieces were being multiplied by the broom and a lot of problems will be arrived for the poor apprentice. A lot of Damages were being produced by the brooms;  nevertheless, a book was being used by the apprentice  to revert the spell, but it was hopeless; consequently, a Whirlpool was being sucked into the apprentice; when in front of him had appeared the sorcerer, who resolved the problem; After that, the hat was returned by the apprentice. It is cleared the surcerer was mad at him; but the apprentice Jobs wasn’t being stopped by the sorcerer, so the household chores were continued by the apprentice.

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