Need help with English homework

timer Asked: Oct 22nd, 2015

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Can you look over this paragraph? 

I glanced at the clock that read 1:12, only an hour left of school then I could go home and sleep for as long as I want. Mr. Nichols was going on about his usual lecture about the importance of us as students to learn the history of the world, so I began to stare off into distance.  I think I might have dozed off for a bit, I thought to myself. Mr. Clark, our principle, was on the floor of the room looking sick and limp. He was hovered over a bloody body. I jumped out of my seat to see what had happened. The sight my eyes saw made me horrified.  He was a zombie. Mr. Morris was infected… I started to run. I ran passed the library, and the cafeteria before I passed the corner and realized there was another one right in front of me. I ran straight passed the zombie to the cafeteria to grab food, a knife to use as a weapon, and the key to Miss B’s room. After, I ran to Miss B’s room, locked the door and blocked it with every file cabinet I saw in the room.  For now I could use the couch as a bed and survive on the food I gathered from the cafeteria kitchen till I run out. But one question filled my mind. How am I going to survive this infection on my own? I heard someone yelling but I didn’t know where the voice was coming from. My eyelids suddenly flickered open to Mr. Nichols giving me a detention slip. PHEW. It was just a dream. 

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