Need help finding errors in this paragraph

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Help me fix 9 errors in this paragraph:

Though people experamented with parachutes hundreds of years ago, the first known parachute jump was made by a Frenchman in 1783. Since the development of air travel parachutes have been used for other reasons escaping from damaged aircraft dropping troops and supplies into war zones and delivering emergency food and medicine too people who are in need. Today, some thrill seekers can wear parachutes just for fun-in the daring,high-flying sport of skydiving. 

NOTE: the errors have to do with commas (series,separate clauses and phrases, and to separate adjectives),colon,using the right word, spelling. 


i so far found 8

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