Revise this paragraph for third person

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  Frantically, I started packing my suitcase.  Without much thought, I grabbed whatever clothes were lying around and I threw them in as quickly as I could.  I rushed to the bathroom and grabbed an old tube of toothpaste, a rusty old razor, and some deodorant.  Within just a few minutes, my suitcase was so full I couldn’t get it closed.  I leaned over the top of the suitcase to help it stay shut, but when I tried to zip up the sides the zipper kept getting caught on random pieces of clothing.  I tore everything apart and shoved it back in, this time with more force and less organization.  At last, I was able to get the suitcase closed.  I ran out of my bedroom door to catch up my friends when I realized I had forgotten my phone!  The next time I plan a vacation, I’ll remember to pack my bags ahead of time.  And set my up the sides the zipper kept getting caught alarm!


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