Revise my paper Please

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Price: $15 USD

Question description

This is my original paper


Career report.docx 


And here are comments you  have to use to revise my paper


https://api.turnitin.com/dv?s=3&student_user=1&o=582279873&u=1024013934&svr=05&session-id=52a2df2920c472483a124abbd4934df1&lang=en_us&r=86.6833813878625



************* Important : You have to make every correction according to those comments ********************


I've got " fail " on this paper... Please do all your best to make me pass this paper...

This is my last chance to re-submit my paper.

The due date for this is Nov 5, 2015 11:55 PM.

Thanks


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