I'm doing an essay on the nove

I'm doing an essay on the novella Anthem by Ayn Rand. i'd like feedback on my thesis which is as follows:" In the novel Anthem, the author Ayn Rand uses the character Equality as a literary device to demonstrate freedom and individuality within societal ideals. She does this by showing is his rebellious nature, his ingenuity, and his endurance of hardships to accomplish his goal"
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