The homework question has two parts: one is to write a full dialogue with description for a summarized climax of a story (transform a summarized event into a scene), the other one is to write a slow-motion version
of the scene (For this last one, keep filmmaking in mind: Begin with an
establishing "shot" and keep zooming in. Instead of moving the action
forward, move it inward and expand, psychologically and in terms of sensory
The summarized climax is:
as it was, the two new lovers started meeting up at Sherry’s home each time Ray
was on a business trip. With time Sherry figured out that she never truly loved
Ray but dated him out of sympathy. She could not hold it any longer since pretense
was not what she was best at. All hell broke loose one day when Ray got home earlier
than he was supposed to. Ray walked into the house only to find them cuddling
in bed. Shocked as he was, his reaction told it all. His dazed face was a sick
pale color as he stumbled unable to keep his body up to walk away. His fears
had been confirmed. Unable to move on with the relationship, the called it quit
after five long years of love and cherish.
Backstory: Andrew, Sherry's crush in college came back to town after being relocated for three years. Ray and Sherry grew up together and he has been chasing Sherry for many years, they eventually ended up dating each other after Andrew went away.
Please write a scene and a slow motion describing their state of mind during the scene in two independent parts.
Thank you very much!