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2015 is an indispensable day for millions of people to remember. Screaming’s of
terror were heard on the streets of Paris, tears dripping down one’s cheek and
blood dripping from bodies continuously. Many families were left with deep
sorrow over the deliberate killings in Paris. Innocent lives were taken away,
leaving the world in shock.
shootings lead up to relative issues to be discussed with global citizens and
politicians in this problematic world. Children are dying of hunger,
unimpeachable lives are being lost, religious hatred rising and terrorism
increasing by day by day.
troubled our citizens in this world. Some don’t have a choice to stop this this
issue and have to relocate to another safer location to live their life.
Refugees are a prime example of people afflicted by war. Thousands of refugees
are fleeing their families to safer locations. Many have a stand against
accepting and welcoming refugees to Canada and some determine it as a benefit
bring a positive and a beneficial impact to our country. Canada’s economy can
create more jobs, which can benefit unemployed people. Immigrants can bring and
develop different skills that can help our working environment. They can
increase the competition in business, leaving companies and businesses more
money. Migrant crisis is increasing in a large amount. We should step up and
help them. They are humans like us… They should have the right to live in a
safe country like us!
needs more peace, love and unity. Let’s stop sending our soldiers to countries
to fight, but to send books and pencils. Education can bring us unity rather
than to fight. Don’t forget to remember about those in Afghanistan, Palestine,
Iraq, Syria, Pakistan and other countries too. The media never refers nor cares
about those in poor countries ( most often middle eastern countries).