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FINAL RESEARCH FOR ENGLISH CORRECT.docx  --->THIS IS MY FINAL RESEARCH PAPER I get a final opportunity to make the paper good.

my paper is on "Ethics of Jim crow by Richard Wrights" is a essay story you can read summary search on google if you want. My paper compares the "Ethics of jim crow by Richard Wrights" to similarities of Jim crow laws, Discrimination against blacks, stop and frisk law and police brutality.

Correct this final research paper try to switch the conclusion ending part with thesis intro just look at pictures on bottom for corrections that have to be made! Make changes to (MLA) syntax citations because they are written wrong! To much repetition in paper! Switch things around by coping and pasting! There are many mistakes that are just a manner of switching things around and coping and pasting it and repositioning the paper! Read the teachers comments for making the corrections. The final grade was bad please try to make it an "A" paper. Please make the best to correct it and make it a good paper.

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Os 1 E… Os… Prof. P English II November 13, 2015 "The Ethics of Living Jim Crow Laws" For centuries, there have been incidents of prejudice and unfairness towards African Americans and their human civil rights; Privileges that have been violated by some laws, like the obsolete Jim Crow Laws, or laws that are enforced improperly by those who are in law enforcement. Racism is still prevalent in the United States based on skin color and racial bias. Laws in the past, such as the outdated Jim Crow Laws, discriminated against African Americans, just as the Stop and Frisk law enforced in many states today discriminates against blacks and leads to instances of police brutality. The U.S. Constitution states that "all men are created equal," but that was not the case in the Jim Crow period of the year 1877 and mid-1960s. The majority of black people in that time got mistreated and chased. There was separation of blacks from whites. In the ethics of Jim Crow, Richard Wright mentions, “We moved from Arkansas to Mississippi. Here we had the good fortune not to live close to white neighborhoods. There were black churches and black preachers; there were black schools and black teachers; black groceries and black clerks.” (Richard Wright 161). This shows that the Jim Crow laws were made to keep blacks far from white people. The whites required Os 2 black folks to segregate themselves from white public areas and other places that black people weren’t allowed. There were public areas that black people were not permitted to share with whites therefore separated both races in transportation, schools, restaurants and restrooms. There were also differences in voting like for black people it was prohibit while whites were allowed. Laws were very strict with Negros, which gave them no equal rights. The Stop and Frisk law can be defined as a strict rule that by any circumstances a police officer has the absolute authority to search any person that may be or seems under suspicion. This strict law has led to a controversy of why police officers respond different depending on the person’s ethnicity. “Black people tend to offend more because they tend to be more disadvantaged, living in poorer urban areas with less access to public services, and so on,”(National Crime). It has been huge problem in society as a law since many police officers have target more than any other race; African Americans. This has led to a belief that, since “there are more crimes committed by African American ethnicity law enforcement are under further suspicion of those who are African Americans than those who are Caucasians”. (National Crime Victimization Survey) For example in an article named (New York Civil Liberties) about the Stop and Frisk law there is a statement that mentions that in order for an officer to stop an individual and search them, the police officer will need a logical explanation for detaining them and conducting an investigation. Therefore a person has to commit a crime or an illegal action in all rights for an investigation to take place. This is also part of the Fourth Amendment rights in the Constitution. The majority of police officers have failed to follow the rules of the Stop and Frisk law, which have produced controversy in Os 3 most African Americans since they are at the highest percentage rate of most detained and searched individuals than any other race. Cops cannot search for evidence of the crime unless they have a valid search warrant therefore they can’t look in purses, wallets, or other things that are suspected unless is a weapon then it will be concealed,” (New York Civil Liberties). This idea proves that cops can’t just stop somebody for suspicion but they have to have a valid explanation to detaining and conducting a search. In the essay of “The Ethics of Living” the main character Richard Wright had a difficult time in his life when dealing with racism compared to those black people in society like in the Jim Crow period when there was racial discrimination among different groups. Richard Wright experiences can relate in a way on how police officers persecute African Americans when they are under suspicion. Police officers are often more doubtful of an African American compared to other race. Which creates a debate on why; police officers often arrest Negros more than other ethnicities. (Racial Justice) The U.S. Bill of Rights in the Fourth Amendment states “The right of the people to be secure in their persons, houses, papers, and effects, against unreasonable searches and seizures, shall not be violated, and no warrants shall issue, but upon probable cause, supported by oath or affirmation, and particularly describing the place to be searched, and the persons or things to be seized,” (U.S. Bill rights). This shows that is a violation of the Fourth Amendment when an officer does not have a reasonable suspicion or probable cause to detain someone unless they have been either seen committing a crime or suspected of misconduct. Therefore, it gives black people the right to walk away from law enforcement officials at any period during questioning if they haven’t committed any crime. Police officers are not allowed to persecute and stop random black people for Os 4 questioning based on their skin color or ethnicity. In a study conducted on law enforcement officers it was found that there are more restrains and frisks on Negros compared to those who are Caucasians. Around 82% of the searches made were African Americans compared which Caucasians were only 10% investigated. (New York Civil Liberties Union) This issue of the Stop and Frisk Law has a correlation on the story “The Ethics of Living by Jim Crow”. “Richard Wright is in a white neighborhood after dark, and therefore is stopped then jammed into the curb by a policeman but as they search Richard and find nothing incriminating they discharge him and officer warns not to repeat his behavior over of going into a white town.” The similarities between the police searching Richard and the Stop and Frisk Law is that Police officers also persecute and search Negros for no apparent reason but more as an excuse of suspicion and racial bias. (Richard Wright 166). In a NY liberty statistics report it is mentioned that in the year of 2011 law enforcement officers stopped individuals in NY for suspicion. This issue has an increase of about 500 percent growth from the year 2000. Most of those people that were detained by police that year were blameless of any criminal action. The people stopped were also African Americans, which proves police officers are at higher suspicion of Negros then white people. (Racial Justice) There is a high rate in police brutally which is that officers are using excessive force against blacks and ending up killing them instead of investigating the situation first. There was a police brutality that was listed as one of the worst cases in a real life on police violence. The victim was a man named Abner Louima. He is an African American Os 5 who was a target by a Caucasian police officer and was sexually and physical hurt. The officer mention that by mistake he thought Louima had punched him in the head. The police persecuted and grabbed Louima then took him to a bathroom which there the officer shoved a broomstick in the victim and put it on his face then committed another malicious action. The officer that committed this brutality and racial discrimination admitted in court that all he wanted to do is cause an embarrassment to Louima. The police made an excuse that after someone supposedly punched him in the head then he thought Louima was the one who did it and ended up persecuting him. (Abner Louima Case) Racial discrimination has been looked as how different races can mistreat others as because of color, and social status. This has affected African Americans the most over the years. The question is why, is that racial discrimination hasn’t improved at all over time not even from past mistakes. This racial behavior is judgmental and has broken the laws as it been in The Stop and frisk law and police brutality actions. This example of Jim Crow story as when Richard's white boss and the son of the boss took advantage and hit a black female for not paying the rent owned.”(Richard Wright 164). This shows a similar event, as when the officer shoved a stick on Abner Louimas face, which shows racial discrimination that some whites have on black people. This is similar to how Richard Wright was also constantly picked on because of his skin color, therefore was mistreated because of segregation of whites and blacks. White people violated many of black people’s civil rights when Richard had another job in a porter at clothing store. Os 6 Racism is an action that is described as a negative response towards certain humans, which is based on skin tone and other contributing factor that judges and characterizes the individual. The Stop and Frisk Law affects African Americans then most races as shown in the case of Abner Louima just as other similar incidents that have happen as seen on the daily news. The Jim Crow laws have been a great example of the differences among whites and blacks, which separated them; in public places. Just as the Stop and Frisk Law also caused controversy on the rate among blacks that get stopped therefore has led to police brutality. The seclusion has existed from back then till today between both races. The solution to the problems between blacks and whites will only improve in society when each of us can treat each other with equal rights. As one time there was famous person that wrote an inspiring quote that expressed equal rights for every person no matter skin color, class status and other judgmental things as the quote said “I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin, but by the content of their character”. (Martin Luther King) Os 7 Works Cited Brown, O., J.R. (2013). The New York City Stop-and- Frisk law: America's war against black males rages on. Western Journal of Black Studies, 37(4), 258-271. "Stop and Frisk to Police Brutality." Interview by Ken Thompson. VIN News, 2 Sept. 2013. Web. 29 Oct. 2015. . Wright, Richard. "The Ethics of Living Jim Crow: An Autobiographical Sketch." The Ethics of Living Jim Crow: By Richard Wright. New York: Viking, 1937. N. page. American Stuff: Work from the Federal. Web. 30 Oct. 2015. 3rd English II November 13, 2015 2 "The Ethics of Living Jim Crow Laws" For centuries, there have been incidents of prejudice and unfairness towards African Americans and their human civil rights; Privileges that have been violated by some laws, like the obsolete Jim Crow Laws, or laws that are enforced improperly by those who are in law enforcement. Racism is still prevalent in the United States based on skin color and racial bias. 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