Can u guys help me add some ad

timer Asked: Nov 26th, 2015

Question description

Can u guys help me add some adverbs (6 or 10) to this paragraph below:Black, cloudy night-time hung over the backdrop of the house. The grey, ramshackle walls of the house looked worn and forbidding, and the dilapidated stairway said to lead and not return.The creaking floor met my feet with clouds of hanging dust as musty smells attempted to overcome me. The house’s burned timbers watched me with growing malice. Darkened the rooms made seeing impossible, and rotted woodwork broke at the merest touch. Scurrying rats made frightened sounds as I walked past. The collapsed roof moaned under the pressure of a cold, persistent wind, and black stagnant water filled the basement in an uninviting pool.I saw the form of a girl hovering in the corner of a room. The floating storm form stood as the most peaceful thing in the house. She moved about the room and appeared to search for things long since gone. She looked upon me as the eerie wind howled between the timbers. She faded and was gone. I wondered who she was, and I wonder to this day.

Tutor Answer

(Top Tutor) Studypool Tutor
School: Rice University
Studypool has helped 1,244,100 students
flag Report DMCA
Similar Questions
Hot Questions
Related Tags

Brown University

1271 Tutors

California Institute of Technology

2131 Tutors

Carnegie Mellon University

982 Tutors

Columbia University

1256 Tutors

Dartmouth University

2113 Tutors

Emory University

2279 Tutors

Harvard University

599 Tutors

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

2319 Tutors

New York University

1645 Tutors

Notre Dam University

1911 Tutors

Oklahoma University

2122 Tutors

Pennsylvania State University

932 Tutors

Princeton University

1211 Tutors

Stanford University

983 Tutors

University of California

1282 Tutors

Oxford University

123 Tutors

Yale University

2325 Tutors