double proof my answer

timer Asked: Dec 11th, 2015

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English is not may native language,can you pls proof my answer and maybe rephrase it in a better way (without accent?) It will take you only one minute:'). Thank you

It's so frustrating no being able to express yourself, 

I enjoyed your discussion as always. You touched a very interesting aspect regarding one of the cause of bullying. Indeed, some children want so desperately to fit in,they would do anything to be accepted by their peer colleagues, even bullying their own class comrades and friends. That  makes me feel sad for the person who gets to be bullied, but also being sad for the child who becomes a bully. That's why we need to focus on raising self confident children, without insecurities, and maybe we can minimize bullying. Our children should learn that being "cool" at school it's not everything, and being rejected won't mean that is the end of the world. 

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