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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in order to retake eco100. I have takin this class twice in the past. In both quarters, I happen to have setbacks occur. I call them setbacks because the events, which took time from studying and completing assignments. Economics is the only class I lack toward my degree. I hope one could possibly understand the events that occurred during both of these quarters.

The first quarter I was enrolled in econ100, was Spring 2013. During that time I was having severe tooth pain. The dentist put me on antibiotic’s and a mild pain medication. The pain medication made me very sick. So, I just ended up just dealing with the pain. Then I finally went through with having my wisdom teeth removed. I was out several days at work do to the pain, sickness, and procedure. After returning to work I several tasks to catch up on. They were courteous enough to let me work overtime and a  Saturday to get caught up. As soon as I was almost caught back up, I was still having pain in my left jaw. After another trip to the dentist, I was diagnosed with dry socket, on the bottom left where my wisdom tooth was removed. It was a hard and trying time for me. Between catching up on my work at my job and dealing with the difficulties from my procedure, my school work lacked that quarter.

The last quarter I took econ100 was Winter 2014. The first couple of weeks my grades were pretty good. Then I was offered a better job opportunity, which involved me moving. So, of course I accepted the job! I had so much going on at that time. I was in the middle of moving and transitioning jobs. I had to travel back and forth to savannah for three weeks for training and meetings. It was exhausting trying to juggle it all. I succeeded when it came to my job and failed when it came to my college course. I didn’t have time to study or complete all that was required.

I am aware that my performance in this course does not give any reason for faith in my abilities to do better but I am in a position to ensure that I am going to take strict steps to ensure that my academic work will be more successful in the future. I will, for one, cut down on the number of work hours to ensure that I get more time to devote to my academics. I will even consider tutoring, if I find the course work difficult. I have also spoken to my adviser at the university who has advised me about what I can do to stay ahead of the academic demands of college. I do believe that my commitments at work were hampering my work at school, leaving me very little time for my studies. I am a good student as my records from my academic performance would show you and I intend to pass econ100 and graduated, if given the chance.

My education is of most importance to me. I have grown as a person and student since then. My job doesn’t require the long hours that my job in the past did. I have plenty of time to study now, as my grades show. I hope that you will make an exception, and let me enroll in eco100 one last time and graduate this spring quarter.

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