thesis -Conclusion , Citation In-text

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1- I need someone to help me to write citation In-text

2- write clear thesis to show what the paragraph about.

3-In Conclusion, should be progression to end, Summary of analysis and Retraction of thesis statement.

The above picture shows the aftermath of a war. The people seen lying motionless in this picture are soldiers who have lost their life to the war. It is clear that these dead soldiers have no shoes on them. Also, their pockets are turned out meaning that not only were they killed but also they were stolen from. The number of the soldiers is astonishing. From a distance, we can see two people both with horses. They seem to be looking after the dead bodies. This is probably one of the best scenarios of the effects a war can bring to the society. What happened to the human race? Where is the first love that God instill in us go? It is so sad to see people die on such crooked way. As it has been known war never happens with the good intentions. The roots of war are hatred, selfishness, and cowardice. Cowardice because courageous people can never resolve their disagreements through consultation. Courageous sit-down, talk then disagree to agree. They never solve their issues in the battlefield. What is more disturbing in this picture is the absence of shoes on the feet of these soldiers. The killers of these soldiers and probably not only murders but also thieves. They mercilessly kill these soldiers and come also for their material possession. The two soldiers are standing from a distance with their horses seem unmoved. In fact, it is as if they are taking care of the dead bodies so that they cannot be rescued. Anyway, these soldiers cannot be rescued so you tender to wonder what the two soldiers. One can just imagine the horror of walking through such s battlefield. The somber mood and a stark lonely scene I the above picture was taken in the Battle of Gettysburg. Although millions of challenges faced photography at the time this photo was taken, the photographer deserves credit for capturing such a sorrowful sin. Timothy who is the photography, in this case, took a total of forty-four photographs including this one. These pictures are stored under the collection of Civil War Picture so that we can never forget the impacts that come with war. Once the sad memories are instilled in our minds through the picture, all we will be thinking is peace. We should all know that they only way we can leave the earth a better place than we found if is by embracing love and harmony. References Gardner's Photographic Sketchbook of the American Civil War, 1861-1865. Delano Greenridge Editions, 2001. Lee, Anthony W., and Elizabeth Young. "On Alexander Gardner's Photographic Sketch Book of the Civil War."

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