Please revise the paper.
My professor said :First person is fine for this assignment. Be sure to vary the speech so that everything does not say I, I,
In the paper, I am proposing ideas to a company, should be using first person because I/we are acting as the Internal consultant. I don't see how you can describe what you would do as the internal consultant without using first person.
Your paper should include the following:
~2 pages: Introduction (Incorporate course objectives 1 – 3)
What is the organization and how did you select it? What is your relationship with the organization? Using a systems perspective, include any historical information about the organization and the organization’s culture that would be helpful in this context. Identify the organizational issue in need of change.
~3 pages: Need for Change (Incorporate course objectives 4 – 5)
Describe the change that needs to take place and discuss internal and external forces that represent obstacles to the change, supporting your opinion with appropriate citations. Describe the various kinds of data you would need to gather to confirm your diagnosis. What level of analysis (organization, group, or individual job) should be applied to this situation?
~3-5 pages: Proposed Solution (Incorporate course objective 6)
Create recommendations for a proposed solution. What do you believe would be an effective intervention? What forces could be harnessed to promote the change? Who should be included in the solution’s implementation? What would be considered a success? What additional approaches could be considered? What steps would you take to implement the recommended solution. Be sure to present your findings objectivelyve that in my paper. Please fix . This is the