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I have amended the paper. I focused on the "Offside rule" in football games, as your teacher required.

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Standards and Principles in Sports
Yifei Zhang
Ben Medeiros
Comm 111T

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Standards and Principles in Sports
Sports are an event that requires the highest degree of professionalism by all those
playing varies roles in it. Values such as fairness and consistency are important in a game, and
they ensure that results are fair and balanced. There are many instances where the results in
some sports, or the decisions made by referees, have fallen short of what was expected.
Unfairness, inconsistency as well as inflexibility in decision-making procedures have seriously
affected sports, and this has become an issue of tremendous significance (Abrams, 2013). It is,
therefore, necessary to implement a consistent style of leadership in sports that will secure
adequate and balanced decision-making procedures. Those who are punished for mistakes
committed in games should be individuals who deserve such punishments. It is necessary for the
referees to understand the authority that they carry and be able to handle decisions in a serious
manner that involves both parties. All decisions made should also follow proof that there had
been an act of indiscipline or a breach of rules.
One of the rules that have emerged to be controversial in many instances is the “offside
rule” in the football sports. As a football fan, I have been left in many instances where an offside
was fairly awarded or not. For instance, especially in the English Premier League, I observed that
offside was...


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