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Consider the memo you will write to Jim Johnson for writing assignment #3.

  1. How direct do you want to be in this memo? In the memo, do you want to tell him everything he is doing wrong? If you did this, how might he respond when he reads the memo?
  2. How indirect do you want to be in this memo? If you simply say that you want to meet to discuss his job performance, how might he feel when he reads the memo?
  3. If you tell him, in the memo, that you have heard complaints about him from other employees, what do you think will happen when he comes to work for his next shift?

You can write a few sentences in response to each of the questions above.

Also, please complete the "memo to an employee" assigment along with the above questions. Thank you!

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WRTG 293 students, Your next assignment will be a memo to an employee. This assignment continues on our potential negative message theme. However, it involves communicating with a part-time employee. The situation you are responding to is described below: _________________________________ You are the manager at Athlete’s Foot Shoe Store. Your store specializes in athletic shoes. Your customers typically are runners, basketball enthusiasts, tennis players, golfers, or others who are active and need quality footwear. Your prices are a bit high. But you have product knowledge. Customers who want information on a specific type of shoe can come to your store and get it. You have information on the product line that discount retailers do not have. While your prices are high, customers pay for knowledge and service. You have no full-time staff. You hire only part-time employees. Most of them are high school or college students. You hired Jim Johnson eight months ago. Jim is a sophomore in college. He works for you two evenings a week and on Saturdays. He puts in 20-25 hours per week. Jim has extensive knowledge of athletic shoes. He runs regularly. He is very familiar with what makes a good running shoe, why basketball shoes would not be good for running, why certain tennis shoes are more durable than others, etc. He regularly reads Running Times magazine. Overall, Jim’s technical knowledge of athletic shoes is unsurpassed by any of your other employees. He knows more than you do, you suspect, about athletic shoes. However, this situation presents a problem. Jim is so knowledgeable about athletic shoes that his skills actually deter his ability to sell shoes. First, he talks too much with the customers about specific shoes. Often, customers get bored with him and find an excuse to leave the store after hearing him talk on and on about technical details they may not be interested in. Second, related to the problem mentioned above, sometimes potential customers listen to his facts about the shoe, and then they go off and purchase it at another store, often for a cheaper price. In short, many of them get their product knowledge from Jim and then buy the shoe elsewhere. Third, when he does make a sale, he spends so much time with the customer that other employees have often made three four four sales in the time it takes him to make one sale. He is not efficient when he makes a sale. Fourth, when the store gets busy, Jim is not helpful because of his focused work ethic and his loquacious verbal style. When 20 or so potential customers are in the store, the employees need to "fill in" for each other. For example, if an employee is going to the back of the store to get a particular shoe for a customer, another employee might ask that employee to get a shoe for his or her potential customer as well. Or if an employee is ringing up a customer for a sale, that employee might ring up another customer as well, even if the sale was coordinated by a different employee. Overall, the workforce at Athlete’s Foot is a team. They help each other out. But Jim is not a team player. He seems oblivious to situations like helping retrieve a shoe or helping ring a customer up. He is focused on the customers he is helping, and he seems unable to see the big picture when the store is busy and teamwork is necessary for a smooth operation. On this fourth issue, other employees have expressed frustration with Jim. They talk about him behind his back occasionally. You have heard their disparaging talk on occasion. However, Jim is a valuable member of your staff. Some customers swear by him and ask for him by name when coming into the store. His product knowledge of shoes is quite amazing. You don’t want to lose him. He has helped customers purchase some high-priced shoes— purchases that you are convinced no other employee would have been able to complete. If a customer needs technical help in being persuaded to buy a pair of shoes, Jim can provide that technical help. You need to write a memo to Jim about his performance. You want to express your concern about the issues mentioned above. But you don’t want to discourage him. You want him to continue with the strengths he has shown on the job. Overall, you don’t want to lose him. However, you do realize that some dynamics of his work patterns should change. The goal of your memo is to set up a face-to-face meeting with Jim to discuss your concerns. You realize that the memo is not going to result in his change in performance. The memo is designed to outline the problems, outline his strengths, and then set up a meeting with him to discuss future actions. Strategies to Consider for this Assignment: Consider your audience. Your primary audience is Jim. However, you might conclude that your secondary audience is your other part-time workers. They are interested in what happens to Jim. You might consider this as an opportunity for Jim. You aren't simply delivering bad news. You are giving him feedback to help him improve. The skills he might take away from this experience will be invaluable to him in his future career. The following websites offer excellent guidance in formatting a memo: • • Wikibooks -- Professional and Technical Writing/Business Communications/Memos Purdue OWL -- Memos Length of your message: Your memo should be 300-400 words in length. Due Date: Your instructor will notify you of the due date.
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Here you go! :) Please let me know if there are any changes you need me to make. Thanks! :)

Main idea: As a valued employee, Jim Johnson must make some changes in his work style.

Outline:






Overview of issues to be addressed
Good attributes of his work style
Brief discussion of talking issues
Team player issues
Summary/conclusion


Assignment:
Consider the memo you will write to Jim Johnson for writing assignment #3.
1. How direct do you want to be in this memo? In the memo, do you want to
tell him everything he is doing wrong? If you did this, how might he
respond when he reads the memo?
2. How indirect do you want to be in this memo? If you simply say that you
want to meet to discuss his job performance, how might he feel when he
reads the memo?
3. If you tell him, in the memo, that you have heard complaints about him
from other employees, what do you think will happen when he comes to
work for his next shift?
You can write a few sentences in response to each of the questions above.
Also, please complete the "memo to an employee" assigment along with the above
questions. Thank you!
Response:
1. How direct do you want to be in this memo? In the memo, do you want to
tell him everything he is doing wrong? If you did this, how might he
respond when he reads the memo?
I want to be firm and direct in this memo, but I don’t want to come across as
aggressive or upset. As a valuable employee, I want to make sure that ...


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