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These are two pages of a persuasive research essay on why Syrian refugees should be allowed to come into the U.S., with the goal of humanizing refugees as persons instead of terrorists (and why the link between the two is very low) as well as counter-arguing any form of opposition mainly coming from Americans that oppose their coming. However, many think that this came off rather confusing, with too much high vocabulary, and in terms of explaining my points.
Please keep the length approximately the same, and add any desired or necessary revisions of your own, for instance adding more supporting information, but primarily re-wording this for a freshmen in college.
I have uploaded the whole essay, available if you would like for your better understanding, but only the two pages highlighted in black frames must be fixed. That is all.
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Syrian Refugee
On November 13, a couple of aggressors composed of an eccentric strike in what the French President
François Hollander called ‘a show of war’ against his country. The suicide bombing had left 129 people
dead and the Syrian president was sympathetic about it, upgrading French plan towards his country
after saying that they should not take what is happening in Syria carefully; but shockingly the European
specialists did not tune in.
France was one of the 65 individuals from the US to drive coalition against the Islamic state, and one of
8 that has composed airstrikes against the party in Syria. France quick fight commitment to Syria was
truly later, after having selected in all airstrike in Iraq in a year back and in September she joined
irrelevant summary of troopers in Syria’s keen war by shelling an ISIS. The venture seemed to...
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