Reword/revise these two pages of a persuasive research essay in better, more understanding words.

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These are two pages of a persuasive research essay on why Syrian refugees should be allowed to come into the U.S., with the goal of humanizing refugees as persons instead of terrorists (and why the link between the two is very low) as well as counter-arguing any form of opposition mainly coming from Americans that oppose their coming. However, many think that this came off rather confusing, with too much high vocabulary, and in terms of explaining my points.

Please keep the length approximately the same, and add any desired or necessary revisions of your own, for instance adding more supporting information, but primarily re-wording this for a freshmen in college.

The whole essay is available if you would like for your better understanding, but only the two pages highlighted in black frames must be fixed. That is all.

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Persuasive Research Essay
Before the potentially displaced people could enter the United States, they are first
screened by UNHCR for refugee, a process that takes up to two years to complete when
everything is taken into account. Following the screening, people then start thinking about their
identities in the US. Added to this is the fact that numbers demonstrate its viability. For example,
the United States has resettled 784, 000 outcasts since the overwhelming assault of September,
and only three people have been connected to taking part in fear based oppressor exercises (State
Department). Out of these three people, two of them were not arranging an assault in the United
States and the speculated arrangements of the third person were barely valid. The danger of a
fear based oppressor assault by a displaced person who experiences the present screening
procedure is practically non-existent. The truth is that psychological oppressors had a less
demanding approach to entering the United States which is the visa waiver program.
This visa program allows visitors from 38 nations to spend only up to 90 days in the US.
The screening for people entering the US through this approach is not as thorough as the exile
application way. For example, in 2013 alone, 21.2 million peopl...


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