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Week 8 Peer Review 2

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Peer Review Assignment

Peer reviews should provide feedback to a peer on the criteria expected in the paper. The Week 8 Feedback Form can be downloaded from the Appendices section of the course guide by clicking the link here. Follow these instructions:

For Online Students:

  1. Choose a classmate's paper from the "Easy Drop off/Pick up Zone" discussion thread in the course shell.
  2. Obtain the Peer Review Feedback Form from the course shell.
  3. Comment on all criteria, noting strengths and / or areas for improvement on the feedback form.
  4. Provide completed Peer Review Feedback Form by posting it to the same "Easy Drop off/Pick up Zone" discussion thread AND submitting it to the Peer Review Assignment link above.
  5. Identify the course, assignment, and date.
    • Provide positive feedback, where appropriate, on the criteria.
    • Identify areas for improvement, where appropriate, and recommend improvements.

    The specific course learning outcomes associated with this assignment are:

    • Recognize the elements and correct use of a thesis statement.
    • Recognize transitional words, phrases, and sentences.
    • Identify effective sentence variety and word choice.
    • Identify positive qualities and opportunities for improvement in writing samples.
    • Analyze the rhetorical strategies of ethos, pathos, logos in writing samples and for incorporation into essays or presentations.
    • Correct grammatical and stylistic errors consistent with Standard Written English
    • Recognize how to organize ideas with transitional words, phrases, and sentences.

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TSA Regulations TSA Regulations Strayer University English 215 Prof: Geza Reilly May 21, 2017 TSA Regulations TSA Regulations We live in a society of rules and regulations weather if it’s at work or driving our car going shopping and yes even taking our kids to a football game or practice. So why should flying be any different. Safety is the biggest factor in everyone’s life and the TSA provides that safety for people who fly on a regular basis such as myself. The TSA (Transport Security Administration) overseas the security of the public transportation services within the United States of America and has a duty to act in the best interests of travelers about their personal safety while traveling. When we think of the TSA we tend to automatically think of the long queues, the airport security rules and regulations. And the TSA officers who check our passports, instruct us to empty our pockets and usher us through metal detectors and other scanners when all we want to do is catch our flight without any hassle. But the creation of the TSA led to many more regulations for travelers to follow and much more freedom from airport security staff about passenger’s personal space and property. For example, the TSA is given permission to open baggage (without having to give a reason) without the consent of the owner, and can destroy locks that they are unable to open with a conventional skeleton key. If this is a concern, consider buying a TSA-approved luggage lock which can be opened without causing any significant damage. If you find that your TSAapproved lock has been damaged or compromised in any way, you will be usually being able to claim for the cost of a replacement. The regulations of the TSA consist of rules for Liquids, Electronics, and Weapons along with Medications and children. The TSA had rules and regulations in place long before the terror TSA Regulations attacks in 2001, but since then the rules have become more detailed and much stricter. And any airline passenger who does not abide by TSA regulations is not permitted to board their flight. There are around 45,000 TSA officers working in airports all over the United State. It is the duty of these officers to screen all domestic and international travelers to maintain the total safety of passengers and airline staff to the best of their ability to ensuring that no prohibited items are taken onboard an aircraft, either concealed inside luggage or on a person’s body. The TSA had rules and regulations in place long before the terror attacks in 2001, but since then the rules have become more detailed and much stricter. Any airline passenger who does not abide by TSA regulations is not permitted to board their flights. Let get back to some of the regulations, first example is regarding Liquids. While the TSA rules change periodically to reflect the level of security issued by Homeland Security, most of the rules regarding airport security are always the same. One rule that the TSA has in place is the 3-1-1 rule. This rule permits airlines passengers to bring liquids aboard any flight if they are in the proper container and declared at airport security. TSA requires all liquids being carried onto any domestic or international fight to be stored in containers that hold no more than 3.4 ounces. Each of these containers must be stored in clear, one-quart bag, and each airline passenger can have only one of these bags. The regulations on electronics are one of strictest sets of TSA restrictions. All electronics devices including cell phones, laptops, tablets and PDA’s must be in working order and demonstrate they have their own functioning power. The TSA may request that you turn on your device and show proof it is in working order. If the TSA determines that any electronic device possess a risk, they can even ban certain models or devices. An example of this ban was put in TSA Regulations place recently for the Samsung Galaxy Note 7. This cellphone’s batteries were catching fire and exploding possessing a major risk for airline safety. Another important rule involves weapons and explosives, many travelers are under the impression that these items are strictly forbidden; this is only partially true. Explosives and gun power are completely forbidden on any flight, at any time. However, weapons such as guns and knives are permitted aboard flights if they are declared and placed securely in checked luggage. No weapon is permitted in carry-on luggage. Additionally, sports equipment such as a baseball bats, gulf clubs, hockey sticks and any other sports items can be checked as well. NO sports items permitted as carry-on luggage. There is another important regulation involves Medications. Many Americans have medical issues that require a prescription for medication every single day. Any passengers who is required to take medications is permitted to bring their medication on board their flight, even in the liquid form. TSA rules require that passengers in need of medication such as insulin shot are required bring with them a note from their doctor allowing them to carry their medication onboard their flight. Additionally, passengers with oxygen tanks are also permitted to bring their tanks aboard their flights. They are urged to consider how much air is in their tanks, and how long their flight will last so they have enough oxygen for the duration of their flight. The TSA is continuing to implement new measures and amend existing procedures to make airport security a quicker and easier process for everyone involved while still maintaining the highest level of safety. TSA Regulations The question is should TSA Regulations be changed? I personally feel that they are perfectly fine just as they are. I feel that they have my best interest in mind every time I fly from one airport to the next. We should all remember that safety is the #1 goal with the TSA. Pros and Cons for TSA Regulations The pros of having TSA Regulations as they are today being that the millions of flyers who take to the skies everyday arrive to and from their various locations. And our country will never suffer another 9/11 with the loss of so many lives. The cons of not having the TSA Regulations that are set in place it would give terrorist free hand on United States airlines and to its passengers who fly the friendly skies. It’s now back to the question at hand “Should TSA Regulations change”. I am fearful if the TSA Regulations change because it would be a gamble on my safety flying and along with every other person as well. I think the rules should remain in place and become stronger to help detour people from wanting to do harm to others in the air. TSA Regulations References www.tsa.gov www.ifly.com
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ENG 215 – Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form
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Appendix A: Peer Review Feedback Form 1
Reviewer’s Name: _

Date: __

Writer’s Assigned #: _
Course:____

Section:__

Assignment 3: Persuasive Paper Part 1: A Problem Exists
Peer reviews should provide feedback to a peer on the criteria expected in the paper. Follow
these instructions:
1) Receive a classmate’s paper from your professor (in class if on-ground; by e-mail if online).
2) Copy the Peer Review Feedback Form from the Appendix.
3) Comment on all criteria, noting strengths and / or areas for improvement on the feedback
form.
4) Provide completed Peer Review Feedback Form and classmate’s paper to your professor.
Note: On-ground students should submit the feedback form and paper to the professor during
the class meeting in which the paper is reviewed; online students should submit the feedback
form and paper to the professor via the Assignment Tab in the course shell.
Criteria

+ Strengths

1. Provide an appropriate title and
an interesting opening paragraph to
appeal to your stated audience
(appeal with logic, ethics, or
emotion).

You have indeed provided a
title, and you have also given
what looks like an introductory
paragraph.

2. Include a defensible, relevant
thesis statement in the first
paragraph. (With revised thesis
statement.)

I have failed to see any form of
a thesis statement in your
paper. All your sentences in the
introductory statement do not
introduce a premise or claim
that you intend to talk about.

Comments < Areas for
Improvement
The topic of your paper is not
clear enough, and I can see that
it is something you just threw
about. It should be clear what it
is that you are writing about TSA
Regulations. Your opening
paragraph is also vague to the
extent that I perceive it to have
been copied...


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