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Now that you've received feedback from your instructor, your peers, possibly your writing fellow, and met with your Team, it is time to revise your Project 2 draft accordingly. But to undertake substantial content revision, you first need to have a plan of action. How can you decide on the steps you'll take to improve the content of your Project 2 draft prior to the final deadline? Please take the following actions:

  • First, review the feedback you received on your rough draft. Do the various stakeholders who reviewed your draft agree on the major revision needs? If so, what are they? Do they disagree? Where? Why? How? Spend some time making sense of and categorizing the specific feedback you received on your rough draft. Make a list of the significant content revision suggestions you received. Put this list in your own words (rather than directly quoting from the feedback you received).
  • Second, review the Project 2 assignment and grading rubric. Doing so should help you prioritze the revision suggestions. In light of the assignment and grading rubric, rank in order (from most important to least important) the revision suggestions.
  • Third, write at least one paragraph that explains your revision plan for your Project 2 draft. This paragraph can draw on the lists you created, but should not simply duplicate them. It is possible that you plan to undertake revisions that weren't mentioned by the stakeholder reviews you received. After all, you're the author of your Project 2 draft. Your paragraph should demonstrate your ability to think critically about the feedback you received, your draft, and your own emerging ideas for how the draft can and should be improved prior to the final deadline.

Your revision plan should *not* address surface level errors or conventions: it is a given that successful writers carefully edit and proofread their compositions prior to turning them in.

Please submit (either attached as a Word-accessible document or pasted into the submission text box of the Assignment) your lists and written paragraph.

While all the Habits of Mind are involved in all work for this course, undertaking true content revision requires Metacognition, Openness, and Engagement.

The deadline for this Assignment is 6/15.

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Running Head: PUBLIC PERSUASION RHETORICAL AND VISUAL ANALYSIS

Public Persuasion Rhetorical and Visual Analysis
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PUBLIC PERSUASION RHETORICAL AND VISUAL ANALYSIS

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Rhetorical Analysis of Advertisement
As the saying goes, ‘A picture is worth a thousand words’ using visual designs in
advertisements helps in delivering messages that is aimed to transform or appeal emotionally to
the audience. Community issues such as drugs, crime, hate, HIV/AIDS, and other social ills can
best be portrayed through visual rhetoric so as to inform the community about the dangers of
such activities in the life of the individuals and the community as a whole. Visual advertising can
signify important message to the audience in a glance. Through images, multiple elements such
as gestures, colors, and emotions are delivered more promptly. Visual rhetoric, in essence, works
better than verbal communication since it is less ambiguous and it is perceived more universally
by the audience (Hornik, 2002). In this sense, I will focus on a visual rhetoric concerning
smoking as one of the major causes of death in many societies around the world.
Anti-smoking visual rhetoric advertisement
Smoking is one of the leading causes of death around the world, and it accounts for about
30% of all cancer deaths arou...


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