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I wrote about Harry Potter series, and how this series have had influence on me.
I wrote almost full of 3 pages, but it might need words more to meet minimum 4 pages.
I'd like you to review my paper, also if you feel trouble my organization, I'd like you to correct.
Explanation & Answer
Alright, as promised, here is your revised essay. I tried not to mess with the content of your paper - I only tried to edit it. That being said, I did rearrange some sentences around and added several sentences, most of which was just filler to get you to your minimum. I was however, only able to get you about half an extra page. Unfortunately, since this is a personal essay, there is only so much I can add, since I don't actually know your experiences. I am attaching the file as a .doc. Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns! :)If you would like to add more information, and then have me edit that, I would be willing to do so.
Rena Suzuki
ENGLISH 101
Assignment #1
Dr. Mark Jaskowski
2017/6/14
Fan of Harry Potter
I was not ever really interested in the English language, mostly because grammar and
pronunciation is very different between Japanese and English. When I was younger, there were
few English speaking foreigners in Japan, which meant that most of the Japanese people had no
need to speak English. Since there was not someone to practice with, and since English was so
hard to learn, I just did not really try at first. However, after I became a fan of the Harry Potter
series, I was inspired to study English. The Harry...
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