Harry Potter series, and how this series have had influence on me, correct grammar, English homework help

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Rena Suzuki
ENGLISH 101
Assignment #1
Dr. Mark Jaskowski
2017/6/14
Fan of Harry Potter

I was not ever really interested in the English language, mostly because grammar and
pronunciation is very different between Japanese and English. When I was younger, there were
few English speaking foreigners in Japan, which meant that most of the Japanese people had no
need to speak English. Since there was not someone to practice with, and since English was so
hard to learn, I just did not really try at first. However, after I became a fan of the Harry Potter
series, I was inspired to study English. The Harry...


Anonymous
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