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Outline Macduff and the witches. New Macbeth based narrative.
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Macduff and the witches. New Macbeth based narrative.
First Draft.
The hours’ candle was burnt almost to lauds when Macduff opened his eyes.
Well rested, he was ready to leave the cot-bed and call his faithful clerk and
manservant Branan. The arrow-slit windows didn´t show any sign of light, but
the promise of a tankard of ale and freshly baked bread with cheese and dried
meat, helped Macduff´s clerk and manservant, Branan, to leave the bed and
help his master to put a clean hose, shirt and jerking. Two soldiers of his retinue
had accompanied Macduff and his clerk to Thane Macbeth´s castle. The battle,
the victory and the celebration, all recent in their minds and bodies.
Macduff took his cloak and war-belt from the chest and put them on, while
listening at the bantering of the soldiers, remembering how Branan has lost a
few coins dicing in the kitchen. All cloaked, because it is always cold in the
morning, the four men left the chamber that all shared th...