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Alwaleed Ayyad CIN: 305046006 15/OCT/2017 DETACHMENT Detachment is a feeling of cutting oneself from any psychological or emotional connection to something or someone. The lack of interest that will lead to detachment can either be of positive causes or negative. For instance, the book Tuesday with Morrie, “Maybe death is the great equalizer; the one big thing that can finally make strangers shed a tear for one another” those are words of Morrie Schwartz explaining the pain in detachment after a strong friendship with Mitch (Albom, 2010). The story of Morrie and Mitch bring about the bigger question which is, “Does self-detachment from a behavior or emotion, have positive effects or not?" re nell developed Paragraph In the book Tuesday with Morrie, Mitch Albom says, “Detachment doesn't o tell us what he did with the knowledge and advice obtained mean you don't let the experience penetrate you. On the contrary, you let it penetrate you fully. That's how you are able to leave it. (Albom, 2010)” In this statement Mitch was trying to explain that detachment is not the end of the emotional connection that you had with someone but rather a chance to live and pass on the experience and love ? shared people share. Morrie death was emotional to Mitch who visited the professor and shared a great friendship together, the knowledge and Morrie's advice were left to Mitch's hands, and it was essential to live life as the used to talk about. Detaching Did he start from the emotional side is the only way to let the experience live on and on. Personally, I do agree with the importance of detaching yourself from living life like they used to talk about? emotions but not experience. The emotion is the connection you share with something or someone, and to able to move on with life it is better to learn how to detach yourself from emotions you related to Life experience is what makes you the person you are, losing or detaching from experience can cause either a negative or a positive explain in what ways impact but either way it means starting new ideas for new experience all over again. It can be Born in Saudi Arabia, raised by my family my worldwide view was a very different negative or positive, starting with my language, culture, and religion. The detachment of living my hometown to come and experience education in another country also affected my social life, like making new friends and a new way of life which brings unique life experiences. For me to continue with my life comfortably, I had to detach myself from the emotional feeling I had growing up in Saudi Arabia and start all over again. "A tension of opposites, like a pull on a rubber band. And most of us live somewhere in the middle. "Sounds like a wrestling match, I say. “A wrestling match.” He laughs. “Yes, you could describe life that way." So which side wins, I ask? I don't think this quote applies to the "Which side wins?" He smiles at me, the crinkled eyes, and the crooked teeth. “Love topic wins. Love always wins. (Albom, 2010)" These are Mitch words from the book Tuesday with Morrie an explanation that detaching from emotions is the best option for inner peace and progress in life. How was their relationship throughout the text? The story of Morrie and Mitch is based on two people friendship of a professor and his student, that over time became intense, and it involved a lot of education about life. Morrie's death stopped the bond physically and emotionally and in order, Mitch to progress with his life he had to detach from the emotions. Detaching from emotions is essential. † Explain once again why H is important to detach yourself from emotions / restate thesis Reviewed By: Carina Hernandes but elaborate
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TUESDAYS WITH MORRIE

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Tuesdays with Morrie

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Abstract

It is a memoir about a young student named Albom and his sociology professor, Morrie
Schwartz at the Brandeis University. The professor was slowly dying of a terminal disease an
since they had not spoken to each other in a span of sixteen years the final conversation they had
is held in reminiscing periods of between Albom graduation and now the reunion they have. It is
here that the name Morrie is realized to have a, meaning to imply ‘‘my teacher’’.

Tuesdays with Morrie

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Detachment

Detachment is the feeling of cutting oneself from any psychological or emotional
connection to something or someone. The lack of interest that will lead to detachment can either
be of positive or negative causes. In the book Tuesdays with Morrie, an excerpt says ‘‘Maybe
death is the great equalizer; the one big thing that can finally make strangers shed a tear for one
another’’. The words being said by Morrie Schwartz explaining the pain of detachment after a
strong friendship with Mitch (Albom, 20...