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Analysis You have a great analysis. However I think you should not abbreviate in your post. Becasue this is an acadeic article. Organization Your organization is good. I can read and easy to understand your article. Style Your style so good. You shows your style by use the academic words. Evidence You have the evidence for your main ideas . However you need to put more information for the first paragraph about the sources you take. I mean you take some sentences in the sources and put it in the paragraph to support your ideas. Format I think you have a good references.But it will be better if you just choose the sources you really need it. Endnote You have the interesting topic. But you need to put more information about your sources you take to support your ideas you want to talk. This what suppose you to do?
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Please have a look at what i have done and in case of any corrections let me know.

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Analysis

Revision plan

According to the review, the

In the revision of the article I

The first this I plan to do is to

article was correctly analyzed

will write the whole article

go through the whole article

and organized appropriately

using full words and avoid

and highlight the area that

hence there was a flow of

abbreviations and if need be I

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